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Weekly update - April 5th

🕑 Added 2025-04-04 16:52:12 +0000 UTC
Weekly update - April 5th

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Those are excellent points Francesco. I'll look to add something that addresses them post story completion. For the Dorm room scenes in particular, I think I was a little cognizant of the fact that a lot of scenes take place there and I felt the need to not over do it.

Francesco Mariotti

Just my 2 cents, [CONTAINS SPOILERS] some filler content isn't that bad, it also helps giving a sense of time passing, you don't need to go in depth, but having some short 3-4 frames scenes of day to day life would've helped with the pacing of chapters 6-7, instead we only know stuff because we're told, we don't see it so it's less real. For example, we only know Michael doesn't sleep at the dorm much anymore because we're told that, while it would've helped having sprinkled over the chapter 3-4 scenes of Emma going to bed alone with some thoughts about not seeing Michael anymore, there is a reason Show Don't Tell is a tenet of storytelling.


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