bewildered_angel
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Ideas doc draft (September 19 edition)
🕑 Added 2025-09-19 20:53:18 +0000 UTChttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1JrVPpHDkqVfeISfLor_2Ltcvz-V1RwF7fmvOgq32-L0/edit?usp=drivesdk
Eat the Dungeon 1.0 is basically done, but I still have a bunch of testing I want to do for it.
For now, work continues on the pitch doc! Here's the summary:
Sci-fi Murder Mystery Visual Novel is now fleshed out with the whole mini game angle I was going for
Sci fi Roguelike Platform Tag Shooter now has early concept art
Eat the Dungeon+ is now Eat the Dungeon 2, and has a whole pitch
Lemme know what you think!
Comments
Bewildered Angel
I admit the AI premise might be thin. Personally I feel like a shapeshifter or parasite would lessen the sense of betrayal when you find the murderer. In murder mysteries I always love the shock factor when you find out a character you liked did the murder. Though I bet you could get a lot of mileage out of characters killing each other to get the parasite and they keep killing the wrong one haha
Thunderclese
I like how the murder mystery has been fleshed out, but I don't know if AI gone wrong is the best route. Maybe an alien is on board and you have to find it. It could be a shape shifter, or a parasite that took over a crewmember. That way AI wants you to kill the alien and now each other at random.
