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TCoH—Chapter 3.24 [47]

🕑 Added 2024-11-24 21:15:07 +0000 UTC

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Eternal Yujin

Wasn't the most logically consistent thing prior to this. This is an early draft I'm opening to criticism to work at. Some things I can't change: - Haku ending up in the Leaf to fight Kabuto with Naruto. - Haku not being able to return to Zabuza. - One thing I am happy with is the thematic comparison between Fuu and Haku. ...Man retconning is a fucking headache. 😭

Big ToFu

Well this has turned into a mess.

Eternal Yujin

I can't spoil Zabuza's plan, but Haku's presence isn't the only way to ensure Fuu's loyalty. And besides, it's 100% true that she compromised her most useful quality after her abilities. Haku isn't a shinobi, she's a ghost with no identity anyway. That makes her useful beyond measure to someone like Zabuza. There are two outcomes here: Haku manages to divert attention from her and join back up with him, or she dies. Either way, he loses the Leaf's attention, which is perfect for him. Fuu, despite her identity being known to the Leaf and Waterfall, is far more of a plus because of Zabuza's ambitions to overthrow Yagura. Fuu has a stronger Tailed Beast than Yagura. As for maintaining her loyalty, who says he can't use Haku that way without her presence? That's all I'll say on this without delving into spoiler territory, though.

Xardas2995

I like the SIs character development. Especially seen from other characters POVs. He is more confident or at least he appears like this to others. Didn’t you say you plan to wrap the Haku Fuu plot up this chapter? You just made it way more complicated. Not that I am complaining, just saying. Is Zabuza stupid? Sending Haku on a suicide mission right after Fuu just joined him? He cannot expect her to just follow him blindly like Haku and if Fuu can get at least one tail chakra cloak he cannot bulls her into submission either. He needs Fuus loyalty.


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