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TCoH—Chapter 3.1 (24)

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 10:58:30 +0000 UTC

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Eternal Yujin

Like I said to Green0Photon: In my mind, canon Kakashi goes one of two ways. Either he feels like Naruto is his last chance to redeem himself, or he's too scared to be responsible for his death. Personally, I think what he does at this point in the series comes down to a difference in opinion between readers. That said, I tried to keep his character as close to canon as I could. Though to elaborate, Kakashi's guilt is slightly different to his canon self. He wasn't part of Naruto's ANBU detail when he lived alone because he retired when he was 2, at least in this fic. Naruto only started living alone when he started the Academy. Kakashi not teaching Naruto doesn't mean he doesn't want to be part of his life, though. Heck, he'll definitely have an important role in the story.

Thanatos

On one hand, Kakashi was a traumatized 13-14 year old soldier when Naruto was orphaned, so I can kinda understand keeping his distance. On the other hand, come on, man. Much as I like him, his excuses are pretty weak, and are just trying to rationalize keeping his own self away from more hurt, a very selfish position. Dropping in from time to time and helping Naruto out with just general living things (like he actually does later in canon, you can find the clips of him filling Naruto's fridge with food) would have better than nothing, nobody was asking him to adopt Naruto. The less said about Jiraiya the better. Tsunade too, now that I think about it, you mentioned that Kushina was straight up adopted by Mito, would would technically make Naruto and Tsunade cousins.

Eternal Yujin

I'm glad. Original plots are iffy in terms of reader interest, which is why I started off the arc with the set up.

Green0Photon

I really enjoyed the setup with the village. You introduce it just early enough so we can care later, and you do so well and thoroughly enough that I care now. Very nice.


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