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Coach Jones 04

🕑 Added 2018-12-22 14:52:05 +0000 UTC

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welan

okay

So this was actually supposed to be the end of the story with Scott and Kenny. I could always do another story with Coach Jones and then incorporate more bully stuff. I was thinking about it but I wanted this story to focus more on Scott losing everything that he thought made him, him but the one thing he couldn't lose was his love of football. I thought I added more about how he was a womanizer who went from woman to woman, and thought the world should revolve around what he wants. Looking back though I didn't really emphasize all that much in it... Not to sound pretentious but it was just supposed to be about Scott losing himself to the guy he tried to control. But looking back I didn't really set that up too well. I thought I'd put more in it with him trying to fight back but it was kind of lackluster... So instead of being a bully womanizer that didn't try too hard at practice he'd turn into a devoted gay guy that tried his best at getting the best body he could. But idk if that really showed through at all... I don't really like going back on posts editing them but I might do some more with coach Jones. It'll be a little bit because I've been working on some other stories for the Tuesday slot and going to post those next. But I'll think about him a little bit more. Also I'll add a pdf of the whole thing to the index tomorrow along with the links and individual files. Also I'll add tags to them as well.

welan

I am in love with this one please make a link with the full story . I really cannot wait to see what Scott really want . Maybe it could be hot to see a more violent change from hin if Kenny get bully and seriously hurt.


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