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Sarah's Find - Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2023-08-16 21:55:31 +0000 UTC

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nintendofan

Yeah, that's fair. Though I have to admit, I'm amazed that most appear to be voting for Sarah to see him (possibly before he ends up in her mouth)!

KevinFred

The whole point of “Sarah’s Find” is that it is guided by the readers. I can’t go against that now, I’m afraid.

nintendofan

Oh, I see! Thanks! I have to admit, I sort of wish there was a bit more 'build-up' (lol) to that part. Maybe the micro character could barely hear some sort of incredibly faint gurgling coming from Sarah's backside or something? I'd also suggest the tiny also getting a whiff of 'rotting potato chips and French onion dip', but that's just me. Semi-unrelated, but I really hope we get some "inside-job action" with Sarah. We've been getting teases of her possibly accidentally eating the micro character for a while now... I'm sure the author doesn't want to go against 'the will of the people', but maybe just this one time...?

Jinchuuriki Jay

No problem buddy! And I don't remember when she scratched her butt lol looking myself but when she farted was in the previous chapter before this when our micro main character was running across the counter. He ends up feeling a explosion from her ass lmao

nintendofan

Weird... I know Sarah's burped and picked her nose, but I don't remember any parts where SHE farted (I know Mary-Jean certainly had some 'digestive issues' very recently) or scratched her butt. If it's no trouble, may I ask where these parts happened?

Jinchuuriki Jay

100% agreed and you did buddy btw 👍

KevinFred

Yes, it was. I try to handle stuff like that...delicately, I guess. It's kind of like using a strong spice. Used appropriately, it can really enhance and elevate. But use it wrong and it can ruin the whole thing. I've seen a lot of people go way too hard in such scenarios and it becomes a major turn off.

Jinchuuriki Jay

Haha ain't that the truth ! Also nice!! That was another thing I was wondering too as well when I swore it was implying that explosion of movement from her butt was her breaking wind lol. I wasn't 100% sure of course but thanks for confirming that for me to buddy lmao Really hope for more of those !

KevinFred

There is an undoubtable voyeuristic aspect of Unaware, and moments like these that really emphasize it. It’s just a fact that people behave differently when they know others are watching. As far as she knows, Sarah is alone and so she acts like it. In the last few chapters, she’s scratched her butt, farted, burped, and picked her nose, while also making a mess around herself. Unaware is like dominant voyeurism, where the one being “spied on” has incredible power that could spell disaster for the tiny people.

Jinchuuriki Jay

Freaking aweosme chapter. The best stuff had to be the nose content honeslty. Never would have expected it but having Sarah pick her own nose was gold ! Love that part where she had an unreadable expression 😋 I wonder why you added that lol I was thinking did you have her contemplate on snacking on her "gold nugget" there or something else lol Wish there was more of that stuff buddy. Also love that part where her hair touched the dip abit too lol

ArwinDan

Can never go wrong with a good dip scene! fantastic job! :)


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