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Chapter 31 - Part 2

🕑 Added 2020-07-31 06:20:35 +0000 UTC

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Kat Vancil

That series is such a tear jerker isn't it? Really loved watching it last year.

owletrece

I'm sorry but wHAT THE FUCK

Alex Richmond

1) Allison has really grown on me over the course of the comic. I love how interested she is in bettering her own mental health and how open she is about talking about it if she thinks she has knowledge that could help others! 2) a lot is really chilling about that last panel with Grandma, but I'm particularly nervous about how ... unaffected? she looks about being caught.

Miraculous Elcie

This comic... All the emotions! And didn't we find it earlier that she's like his great grandmother or something? But what's she doing to his dad??

Miraculous Elcie

It might sound a little better with "How did you know-" instead of "How do you know..." since the hyphen will show if Arya is being cut off and since the grandmother already knows. On the "but you can't force him to be near you if he doesn't want to be" page, Evan's hoodie is two different colors, though I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that because of shadows... It might sound better as "And it's not your responsibility to solve his issues." ("Problems" might sound better than issues.) Just to keep the advice using some of the same terms... It would sound really good if Aaron said, "When he asks for your help, it'll be your responsibility to decide to be there for him." When Evan and Allison are going back and forth, and he says, "I can do that!" capitalizing or adding italics to "can" will add to the challenge he's giving. 😊 For the "It's not like I asked for your opinion or your hel..." Changing the ellipses to a hyphen will show Evan being cut off. "He thinks we didn't notice that he wants help, ~cute~" "He brags about how he's good at everything, yet he's horrible with relationships." "I know, that's why he doesn't have more friends." "THIS IS WHY I NEVER WANNA HANG OUT WITH YOU!" "You can talk to us about your feelings if you want~" It doesn't make as much sense to have "you" in quote marks here. If you're going for what I think you're going for, it might make more sense if it's like: I don't know if that has something to do with you being able to "make magic" You forgot an apostrophe in won't for "How is it that the committee won't notice?" "Your grandma is really good at going unnoticed."

Nana

I am now wondering if Ansels grandma is the bad guy??? I mean I know Ansels dad is super wrong but what in the world is she doing to him!!!

Ileah

What if she's his mother? :o

Julia D. Finelt

I legit yelled out “GRANDMA NOOO put my boyfriend down!!” Cause Ansel was too shocked to say it

Ivy

Oh damn, is that Ansel’s dad at the end?? If her magic really is chlorokinesis, does it have anything to do with being able to, um, “maintain” living creatures dormant for a while? I think I might be far off but I can’t wait for the next episode!!!

VOIDP

More?

thladybug

I wasn’t ready for that ending. Also Evan trying to change and be better for Ansel 😭

Rain Elise Longoria

THAT SMILEEE, sigh, I love this series so much

Ximinnie

It’s time manipulation magiccccc!!!!! Or not? Love to see Evan maturing!

Raven Kurtz

I just got done balling my eyes out at the ending of Darling in the Franxx and now I'm theorizing about Ansel's grandma and the fact that he has magic instead of any of his sisters and ahshajsnwknsjwnwjdne it's too late to be thinking about this stuff 😂😂

Graciela

OH SHIT

Vii Cky

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Rozanthie

Your artwork in the last few chapters has leveled up. 👌 I'm loving the colours and the new angles and the framing on everything in the most recent uploads. It's just - ugh. 😍 Also, exasperated Evan is adorable. Another brilliant episode. Thank you! 🤗

GetGinxed

Im so happy that Evan is growing emotionally :) He's matured so well throughout your story and I really really appreciate that! I'd also like to praise the actual graphics in this episode! The last panel of Evan smiling is CHEF'S KISS! And that panel with Arya standing over Ansel with the POV from below??? GORGEOUS. I'd hate for this story to end, so I'm savoring all these last few episodes!!! 😍😍😍

Skie

The thing with grandma I understand, starting guessing something was off about her for awhile. Evans emotions on the other hand I'm completely lost on.😒

Kayla

The conspiracy continues & I cannot wait how it unfolds! Sooo excited!

Gracie Bou

Well, if he hit MY kid there aren’t a lot of things I would hesitate to do to him. He reaps what he sows. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ though I thought she just drove him out of the house. What on earth is she doing