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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2025-03-16 01:15:55 +0000 UTC

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Brian Jordan

So our hero finding a book about riding dragons could just be coincidence. The fact that his reading it means he will be alive for the next chapter remains welcome news. The question of who set him up for this is still unanswered and distinctly unwelcome news.

Professor Quill

I always thought Fleur deserved more recognition during the tournament, especially the first task.

Erinnyes

Tons of fun, loved to see the different take on the task.

Doug Barton

Nice chapter! I was glad to see Chekov's dragon riding book get paid off. Couple of notes, you have canon instead of cannon several times, and peak instead of peek a couple. There is also this, "Despite his fear, he could stop the elation that swelled within him." which should be "could not" or "couldn't." In any case, I love how Levina scolded the dragon. She's such a bad-ass. LOL

Jim Wiegand

I liked it. I did think he was gonna end up with another familiar, but this was more "realistic" so to speak. Michelle/Hermione in the works?

Professor Quill

Whoops

Matthew Williams

It's a small thing and somewhat understandable, but you have a frequent homophones mixup this chapter. "Canon" refers to a general principle or rule by which something is judged or a set of principle texts used as a core reference for something. Meanwhile, "cannon" is the big blasty mcblaster from medieval siege warfare.


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