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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-03-07 15:05:54 +0000 UTC

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noru

Agreed, I also primarily read romance for the fluffy, soft, and intimate moments and that isn't really as prevalent because it takes a backseat to the harem/smut. This has been very refreshing all in all.

Nova Sana

I was going to write something similar, but since you already have I’ll just piggyback on yours. Harem fics can be fun, but a monogamous relationship has its own unique virtues. I enjoy the opportunity it gives the writer to bring a focus and growth of intimacy. It’s harder in some ways and it takes a strong writer to craft that kind of depth. Minor bit: ungulate is a type of hooved animal (including sheep, pigs, horses). Undulate is a smooth up/down motion. Pretty sure you meant to use the latter in your story, but with Tonks who knows…

Doug Barton

Another great chapter for one of my favorite Honks fics, thanks!

Professor Quill

I haven't really thought about it, tbh. I'll give it some thought and get back to you.

Brian Jordan

Apologies. This is a long comment. Points for finding a way for a Harry/Hermione scene that didn't violate the story's only Harry and Tonks rule. Quite clever. I am a bit more concerned about Harry 'just happening' to find a book about dragon riding. Given his tendency to take risks it is potentially most worrisome. However,,, Earlier, Draco tried to give Harry information on the first task and was rebuffed. Given that Draco has been very much his 'normal' self - ie a petty self-centered jerk - that surprised no one, but I find myself asking if maybe, just maybe, Draco has decided to up his game and give Harry information indirectly. Finally, a question: in the canon timeline, the second year at Hogwarts featured Riddle boy's diary nearly getting Ginny - and several others - killed. That was because Lucius Malfoy slipped it into Ginny's school supplies. Did that happen here as well? If so, how did Draco handle it, especially if he found out Daddy dearest could well have gotten him killed with that gambit?

noru

Big fan of a monogamous pairing from you, especially if it's Honks (I'm not biased you are.) While the super harem stuff is and cane be fun your writing strengths show way more in something like this. I may be also slightly biased though, ive gotten somewhat tired of harems as whole with how much is being put into AO3 constantly at the moment. Great chapter as always, wishing you well

Jim Wiegand

Loved it. Kept it strictly Honks, but with playtime. I hadn't thought of the other role playing ideas, like Disney princesses, that Tonks could do before. Not sure why I've never seen it before. It's an easy universe cross without actually doing it. Well played. The breakfast scene was hilarious.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Very nice thanks for the chapter !


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