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The Rescue: Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2024-12-20 03:23:20 +0000 UTC

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Professor Quill

I'll probably come back to it at some point.

Douglas Braning

Any chance of future chapters?

GhostnKC

It's a new year and hopefully we get a new chapter. This is quickly becoming a very enjoyable read.

Shammy2618

Another comment 5 months later lol. Comeback to this story!!! It’s so nice reading a competent and obviously very magically powerful Harry but clearly still is limited by his lack of spell knowledge, and overall magic knowledge due to his age. Unlike other fanfics harry thankfully isn’t written to be way over the top to the point where he is more powerful than Dumbledore, could kill Voldemort with a snap, and is also Mr ultra cool powerful sauve guy. However, you didn’t overdue it the other way and make him either incompetent, or barely avg, and feels powerless in the story. Second, I thought the romance in this story was pretty damn cute so far. You also did a good job finding the middle ground for harry in that aspect. He isn’t some weird a-sexual robot who is terrified of women, and doesn’t even know what a vagina is, because why would any woman want to date a man scared to touch them lol. Yet, you also didn’t make him Mr super cool guy who gets every girl no problem, and is perfectly smooth all the time with no teenage awkwardness/growing pains. Basically wish fulfillment slop. So many stories fall into one extreme or the other, and often is a sign of an immature writer. Which I greatly appreciate the fact you are not that. That’s why I’m still hoping for more of this story.

Cdonovan

Looking forward to when you return to this story.

Professor Quill

No, not abandoned. I'll come back to it eventually.

Shammy2618

Really hoping for more on this story! It’s so damn nice to see someone write a more believable version of Harry that’s actually evolves as the story goes. Of course Harry starts off nervous and blushing when first getting to know Fleur, and dealing with her flirting. However, unlike many other (worse) stories, Harry actually grows from those experiences!!!! We see him continually getting more comfortable as his relationship with fleur gets closer. Which in turn boosts his confidence to eventually start throwing innuendo around just as well as she does! Such a breath of fresh air from the version of Harry doomed to never change, only capable of blushing and stammering during any interaction with women. Would love to see Harry’s growing confidence also start to translate to other area of his life, such as his magical abilities. With his growing confidence allowing him to much more of his unlimited potential. Especially after seeing his shocking levels of power in the first task.

Joshua Travis

Hopefully there’s more coming!

Brian Jordan

There was a role playing game called "Teenagers From Outer Space". One of the rules for GM's was that characters -who were mainly 'normal' (read often heavily hormone driven) teenagers should never be allowed to have sex. Why? Because sex is not funny - and funny was the norm for the scenarios - but frustration is. The trick is how far to let things go before something happens to ruin the moment. This was a quite impressive example of that rule in action. My complements.

Brutus

Ooof. Cockblocked by half giants haha. Great chapter

sykartracer

The way you’re writing Harry, sounds like he’s going to be an ass enjoyer. Great mix of plot and spice.

orthodox1057

It was worth the wait.

The Humble CTurtle

Nice, been waiting for this one.

Aeron Danaher

Very well done! My compliments to the chef!


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