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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2023-11-08 13:55:07 +0000 UTC

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Professor Quill

Nevada, and I don't know much about Native American Animism.

hnbi

The Thunderbird is cool and everything, but some Native American Animism influence would be a good thematic touch. Was hoping that was the whole point of placing em in Arizona.

Taium

"The small town they now lived in forced him to branch out into almost every aspect of the law, from personal injury to LEGAL CONTRACTS." Oh, look, it's Voldemort and/or Dumbledore's plans derailing before they leave the station.

TH

Poor Harry, simping after Tonks is cute in a way.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Nice he’s got a thunderbird familiar all he needs now is to shoot lightning from his fingers like emperor palpatine and he’ll be called the lightning lord

Salvage48

They needed a hero, we needed an awesome story! Win ,win for everyone. I'm curious if Hedwig will also make an appearance!

Stephen Alworth

I hope this doesn’t come off as mean spirited or pedantic.

Stephen Alworth

Ive never heard of Levina to mean “Lightning Bolt,” in all Latin dictionaries I could find, or have on hand Lighting is Fulger, but Fulmen or Fulmina means lighting that strikes or strikes like lightning. Levina from what I could find is only defined as Lightning Bolt on baby naming websites so I’m kind of curious where you found that. Im just wondering because I loved the chapter as always.

Doobiesnax42

An excellent series so far, and I hope that there's much more to come. You're a great writer my dude, and I'm always looking forward to your next chapter

Kant B. Write

I love the awkwardness of Harry noticing older girls and them completely overlooking him, it brings back some memories.

Aeron Danaher

I love this series. It's awesome seeing how different his life could be compared to the canon. You do a fantastic job of writing it!

SharpShooter345

Another great chapter

Erinnyes

Wonderful dance through their years in America, and it's fun to see the differences in this Harry start to really emerge. I love the addition of Levina, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of her. Tonks/Harry for life!


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