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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2023-10-14 21:26:41 +0000 UTC

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GhostnKC

Came back to read the current 3 chapters again. I'm hyped for chapter 4. And 5, and however many more this great story gets

jordan

Honestly the most fantastical thing in the chapter was an effective American congress.

HowlerAtTheMoon

I'm loving this story, the shorter chapters are both amazing and packed with storyline!

Toraneko Mai

Very promising so far, and i'm looking forward to seeing more of it. i do have one little spelling/grammar nitpick, that while not really consequential does make me cringe a little. when voting, while the sound is "yay" it is actually spelled "yea"

Shawn.justshawn

This is very promising! I am looking forward to this one now more then ever!

TheWickedTruth

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

JaxonGold

Getting to see all of the reactions from Hagrid, to Dumbledore, to the minister and Barty Crouch, the public, and especially Severus Snape is what I’m living for right now.

Josh Robbins

I love this story already

Doobiesnax42

Consistently great writing dude. Looking forward to the next piece

J.Rogue

Getting much better, the premise sounded good but the first chapter had me iffy on the story second chapter was better but this one has my interest in the story

Erinnyes

Another solid chapter, really looking forward to seeing an American raised Harry reacting to the insanity that is magical Britain. :D

jp9901

I like it. Now let's watch the shitstorm happening in Britian when this gets out

Professor Quill

Nope, the republican party never formed on the magical side. Just an interesting bit of history I thought I'd throw in.

Aeron Danaher

This is quickly becoming my new favorite series. I love the perspectives and characters you're showing us. Especially modern day magical US. Now we just need to wait for Harry to meet Draco for the first time ... And for Harry to make us Americans proud.

Austin Brouk

So did the party switch not happen here then?

Matt

Excited for more, thank you for another good chapter


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