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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2023-10-08 17:47:54 +0000 UTC

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Romavictrix

Hoping for more chapters soon

Gregory95

Wtf Ted and Andi reaction to the Potters deaths

Draco Pendragon

Hmmm.... Not bad, but I'll reserve judgement until I've read a few more chapters.

TotalCombo

I really liked the premise when you put out the poll a few days ago and this is a pretty good start! Loved that you didn't skip the part where Sirius finds his dead friends as most fics tend to do nowadays. Made me tear up a bit... already really invested in this

Cateagle

That's a great start with excellent questions and I look forward to Dumbledore being frustarted and interrogated as well as denied control of Harry.

TheWickedTruth

Great start, I'm looking forward to more.

Beckendwarf

I’m so excited for this story. It has such a fun premise and I love how the canon has been explained as to why the motorcycle is there. Can’t wait for the next

mozeg

This one is going to be great. Hooked after just one chapter, really good work.

Ashtree

I'm so excited for this one

Brutus

One chapter in and I am already hooked.

Professor Quill

I like trying to justify Canon, lol.

LizzyKat

It's a good start, with a new angle on the story that I hadn't read before. I'm curious to read the rest.

Erinnyes

Banger of a first chapter, those *are* all excellent questions. Nice cleanup you did on why Sirius took his motorcycle instead of just appearing. Great intro, and I'm really excited for this one!

Doobiesnax42

This is a great story in the making dude. Looking forward to more, as always


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