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Dorm Party: Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2023-08-07 13:08:43 +0000 UTC

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GrouchyGritic

Great work! Hope Luna is special guests

DothrakiKing

Yes yes more more

James Trammell

It’s funny. Hermione thought Harry would think she is a slut because of the party, but really, she was one of the least sluttiest at the party. Now Lavender, Katie and Ginny on the other hand. Lol! Keep up the great work!

Robert

I really like the potential of this story. It has so many potential avenues for you to explore. I loved Harry and Katie’s interaction in the first chapter and Harry and Ginny’s in both. The emotions between Harry and Hermione and the scene were well written. Hopefully Harry managed to assuage enough of Hermione’s insecurities so all the fun can continue. That interaction with Lavender at the end subtly pointed in that direction I think. Excited to see where this goes. Cheers

J.Rogue

I really didn’t think this needed a sequel, I’m glad I was wrong well done 👍

Alatoic

Damn, nice way to better up a really good story, now have a good build up with Hermione as the steady girlfriend that let her boyfriend shag the rest of the dorm. will be quite an interesting story.

DragonsAndBroomsticks

Is there going to be another writing contest? I'd really have liked to participate last month but I had some exams back then.

DragonsAndBroomsticks

That was great. Looking forward to the next party.

Robert Liston

More please!

Cateagle

That was most enjoyable. Nicely erotic while also developing the story and moving it forward. The next party is going to be very interesting now that "the ice has been broken".

S-267

Moar. Lovely jubly

Chichi son

Slowly, a smile stretched across her face, and she rolled over to face Harry. He looked so calm and peaceful when he was asleep I actually made her heart ache. it With everything that had happened in his life, she could on imagine how his mind tortured him while he slept. only

Kazock

I think a lot of that has to do with how canon portrayed the initial relationship. If you go back to the original books, you could get a sense that Harry and Hermione were softer with each other, there was more depth there. Ginny on the other hand was still somewhat portrayed as a fangirl. After the release of Hallows. Rowling did remark that the Harry/Ginny was a mistake, To me the paring Harry/Ginny is more following in the James/Lily footsteps. James married Lily. Why then would Harry marry Ginny. Its just a bit tropey for me.

Jeff

This is interesting. I haven't seen any Harry/Ginny content in a while. There seems to be an almost wholesale rejection of that pairing in the fandom.

Pelessari

LOVE that you have a story that heavily features Ginny. I love the Hermione, Fleur and Tonks stuff you do, but it’s really nice to see some of the side characters like Ginny and Lavender get attention as well. I can’t wait to see you involve other characters like Daphne and Pansy later on in this story, as well!

Erinnyes

You did an amazing job with Hermione's first time. It was sweet, romantic, fluffy, and sexy all at once and it was perfect for who the two are and everything they've been through together. That you managed to shift gears so hard from the rough, aggressively quicky in a closet from one page earlier is just damn impressive.

Salvage48

Dorm Party 3 plz!


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