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Thrown Back: Chapter 27

🕑 Added 2023-07-07 05:19:28 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Edwards

All this time since it released and I still don’t know if you meant to do a minor Easter egg crossover by introducing Harry Potter to Regina George or if it was coincidence, but I still laugh every time I read it

Professor Quill

That was a mistake. I'll get it fixed.

Lord Terra

In the last chapter, David asks Harry who he marries and in this chapter you wrote that he has a wife. I wanted to know if that was intentional or just a mistake.

Peyton Knight

You have it noted that the holly wand was in use 17 years, was only like 8. Also Cygnus is noted as being head of family but assuming Arcturus is dead Orion Black is head. Otherwise great read

Ironcoil

Still find this to be an amazing read, the plot is really good and I’m looking forward to seeing what trials the Harry and the Ladies will face together. Looking forward to the continuation.

rlmsbpjpp

Story seems due for some adversity/setback. Things have been going too well for Harry. Maybe the cloaked figure is a member of the wizarding press... Intrigued by what's going on at wolf's den they go to check it out themselves... Morning headline rather than proclaiming a cure for werewolves would proclaim he was fornicating with a known werewolf during the full moon in an effort to breed some new hybrid species. Just vague enough to be true but to cause a backlash among the wizarding community over the perversions and distrust within the werewolf community which was already skeptical over the offer of Wolf's Den and in particular very hesitant to take part in the "experiment" happening in the house during the full moon, with only a small handful of people actually knowing what's happening and they've all kept it quiet do to the lack of cages and experimental status. Which would then give Harry his next windmill to tilt at and crush like the tiny bug the press will be to the legend that a thrown back harry potter is becoming.

Shane89

Cloaked figure might be a member of House Zabini, who might have caught wind of the possible cure and learned that it was going to be tested on Adriana. They might be here to see if there was success.

Kazock

I like the little James Bond reference to the knife blade in the shoe.

Taium

Going to be honest. When I saw "three bedrooms" I thought he was buying Number Four, Privet Drive to make it the antithesis of what it was when he was growing up. As for our mysterious shadowy figure, I'd rather it be James trying to pull his head out of his ass rather than anything malicious.

Chichi son

The hardest part of getting over the fear. part is getting?

orthodox1057

"No one noticed the cloaked figure watching them from just outside the wards. Slipping silently into the shadows, he vanished without a sound." *Sigh* Who wants what now?!

Sapph89

Think you need to do a retcon with David. In an earlier chapter when Harry told David about being from the future, David asks who he married and about Susan when Harry tells him he had a daughter, and now in this chapter he's married. Kinda wish we could have seen more interaction between Crouch and how Harry knows Barty Jr. is/is going to be a death Eater

Luck1N

two Thrown Back chapters in a row?! .... the world is good again

Erinnyes

Every time you drop a chapter, I'm reminded why this is one of my favorite stories. The characters are fun, the main girls all have a unique personality and niche in the relationships, and the world is enjoyable.

TC

as for the chapter… I don’t like dark cloaked figures. Could be anyone.

TC

Would it help if I pointed out mistakes I see? Like when Harry is talking to David you said her blue eyes instead of what I assume was supposed to be his. And when talking about the ice you missed a word or two. “The hardest part of getting over the fear”.


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