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Forever in a Day: Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2023-05-10 14:28:54 +0000 UTC

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HowlerAtTheMoon

Good ending, I have been looking forward to the conclusion, you do not disappoint

P. C.

As far as fantasies go, this is one of the best. I'm incredibly glad the core group stayed together.

DyslexicdraB

This made me laugh WAY too hard lmao

noru

Honestly really excited for the this story to come to a close, its really been a journey reading through it.

Hacura

I love this story. Thank you. Suzette is a great OC.

Basti Fortuna

Hopefully you still post at least another chapter.

Taium

This chapter is an after effects gold mine. So many details from canon could change. Every Harry fangirl that didn't get to go with him could be looking for revenge. Percy could actually pull his head out of his ass after 5 years of droning about his job. Vector could learn about Harry and Sinestra and want her turn or a threesome. Karkaroff doing a runner during the ball. Hagrid and Maxime having 5 years of dates. Myrtle and Skeeter getting even more stalkerish.

Sage Berthelsen

I wasn’t really thinking about other people but yeah.

Taium

There's a possibility of PTSD for pretty much everyone if you think about it. There's no indication it was limited to Hogwarts or even Britain. Imagine being some guy in the middle of nowhere, waking up on Christmas to the memory of doing the exact same Christmas for 5 years in a row. That's going to screw with your head

Taium

Don't forget the sequel, Forever in a Day: The Revenge of Romilda Vane

Sage Berthelsen

PTSD is gonna be a bitch for that man.

William Drennan

I did not see the previous comments as they were not there when I had finished reading

William Drennan

is this the end? or will there be one final chapter to show how they go on after the time loop ends?

Professor Quill

There will be one more chapter

Randal Durham

This is a great place to end the story, I’m hoping for a sequel on how the story plays out against Voldemort and Barty, especially if they remember.

Chichi son

I'd love to see this continue at least a bit more to show more of the after math

Laughing_Turtle

Love that everyone remembered. I wonder how much maturing you do if 5 years of the same day get shoved into your head all at once.

Erinnyes

Oh I do so hope we get to see Draco's reaction to remembering certain things... Oh boy is that going to cause a mess! Great chapter, and awesome work. This has been a rollercoaster ride from start to end and while I'm sorry to see it close I think it has gone as far as it needed to. This is the right place to draw it to a conclusion, and great work with it.


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