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30 Days: Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2023-04-30 10:54:44 +0000 UTC

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Lordofnite 18

I really hope Daphne joins like she makes a exception for Harry

damien girard

easy way for daphne is she agree to provide an heir (prob through Harry) so she can be a "witches witch"

Professor Quill

I'm just doing the 30 days. I have other things I want to move on to.

Erinnyes

Really loving the way you're continuing to show Harry as well meaning and intelligent but new to the position. He's not supernaturally competent already, but he's got his small group of people he listens to and that just makes the story *work*. The relationship with Penny is much the same, you've done just a great job making it feel organic and all the more satisfying for it.

Dr.Scribe

Also now I am wondering who would head the dmle after Amelia...and wondering if I would want to encourage the solid relationship of Penny and Harry and the relationship of Daphne and Hermione to have a sort of arrangement where both pairs view their partner as their primary capital L love yet allows Harry the leeway and Hermione the pleasure of getting her fill of wizards from Harry on occasion. Kinda like the two couples end up couples woth each other in a not full blown sense both for fun bedroom games and potentially legal (marriage reasons) and for offspring

Dr.Scribe

Again loving the spectrum here. You have heartwarming romance in a couple and steamy full throttle other stories. Yet another reason I think you writing a darker story would also be great not only does it allow you to stretch as an author but also will probably help you keep improving in the lighter themed stories as well. Each time you write a different enough story in theme, pace, pairing style, or even different enough concept you really show off another thing in writing you are able to pull off pretty well and gets better with each chapter you explore that facet of your writing. Keep it up

FicFinder

Great chapter as always. Now that Penny will be following Harry to Hogwarts, will this fic continue through that, or will it just be covering the namesake 30 days? I know it started as a fic that wasn’t supposed to go beyond 5 chapters, but it’s nice to see your stuff grow organically


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