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Thrown Back: Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2023-04-18 21:14:25 +0000 UTC

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Seananagan

God, this chapter is amazing. This is totally how you have a powerful Harry while still fully highlighting his weaknesses against a foe like Voldemort. I feel like I started this story because I just wanted another Harry/Narcissa/Bellatrix fic like this one I can't properly remember anymore where he became OP and "cleansed" Bellatrix's deeds from the world, idk how to describe it, it's been a while and I think it was deleted. But anyway, this fic became much more than just wish fulfillment. You're such a talented writer that I don't see myself ever not paying for your content even if this story is the only reason I am doing so. I was really behind on stuff, so am just now getting to this chapter, and just want to say thank you.

GhostnKC

How to have a super-powered Harry without going overboard. This chapter is a nearly perfect example. This chapter has action, suspense, and a charm to it that made me want more. I salute you Professor.

J T

This chapter made my day. Thank you!

Sage Berthelsen

I just read it again. I love the announcer’s bit.

Sage Berthelsen

What an epic of dramatic action! Loved this chapter, great work!

Cerber

Solid chapter! The fact that the order got no help from people at the stadium made perfectly sense, while the guy on the mic is straight up crazy

Kazock

I mist agree with Dr. Scribe. This is great writing. Keeping pace while having different POV's of the same sequence sounds easy, but to get it right takes talent.

WrexColeTrain

Wow talk about a big action sequence. Great update on this one. I'm looking forward to where this leafs to now. I hope we get to see some more harry Dorea that could have a some big implications and help. She's a black and a potter so has an in with both families. Sounds like a formidable witch as well. Great job quill.

Fanfic Lover

This was an action packed update! Loved it. I was half expecting the trope of one wand patronus holding off 100s of dementors and other wand taking on Voldieshorts but I'm glad you kept it quite reasonable lol. Loved the interaction with Dorea as well. I'm thinking the house wards might have given some hints so excited to see where that's going.

Dr.Scribe

kinda wonder if she will piece it together or somehow some artifact in the potter house will peg him as the youngest potter in the line even if he is chronologically older than some...showing him displaced in time. But non the less it is heart warming for him to have ancillary family members that are a net positive for this Harry

Dr.Scribe

I know you aren't always 100% confident on your action sequences but this one was quite good. Kept the pace flying while still giving a clear enough picture to imagine in our own minds eye. Another plus was it was clearly not just the same 4 spells over and over again with a variety of how offense was met with defense. Not always easy to do. Also something you don't do often inside a chapter of perspective switching was pulled off. It didn't bleed off tension where it didnt need to and didnt have a disconnect with how it read when switching to make it feel choppy (another easy thing to fall into that you did not fall into. Also let some character moments happen that we wouldn't have gotten to see but would have been had to be told about later. So we didnt go into the bad side of describe don't explain version of show dont tell. Which is something I struggle with even when I don't have a deadline sometime. Great job on the writing execution of the chapter on top of it being fun to read and plot/character choices. Having the "op Harry" set up but still keeping it where he isn't a full deus ex and having all the people play a part in the fight that has meaning including civilians mustering up there meager courage to contribute was great.

King hand axe

A really enjoyable chapter. I really enjoyed Harry's dynamic with Dorea and how Lilly was worried.


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