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Forever in a Day: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2023-04-11 21:58:04 +0000 UTC

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SSs34TheElf

There were some fics that have done tonks as the DADA teacher in 5th year, but I can totally see Fleur in that role too. Thing is, Umbridge can still be in school cuz she could just easily replace Binns as the history professor. And as unfortunate as it is, Umbridge would actually be a better history professor than the ghost despite her ministry pro blood purity propaganda. It would ironically be harder for Dumbledore to argue against her appointment as a history teacher, than DADA, where Umbridge is clearly more incompetent.

Chichi son

Harry knew there was no way her could hide his excitement as they stood for the opening dance, but he didn’t care. When Cho stared wide eyed at the prominent bulge in his slacks, he smirked and gave her a wink. Taking Fleur’s hand as she covered a giggle, he led her out onto the dance floor. he could hide? “Seriously?” Malfoy laughed. “You think Potter can’t beat me in a duel? You’re on, Greengrass. Unless you’re too scared, Potter.” can beat me?

Cateagle

A most enjoyable chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one, even as this story comes to a close. I do hope that after some rest, your muse comes bck with an equally enjoyable sequel. I can just imagine Umbridge's horror as "Clan Potter" takes over Hogwarts, perhaps Fleur gaining the DADA professorship instead of Umbridge and the pink toad getting smacked down hard and permanently if she tries anything with them.

TC

Amazing

Scott

Very well done

noru

Oh wow, lovely chapter seems that this story is starting to end sadly. Cant wait to see what new things you put out.

Sage Berthelsen

Gonna miss this story for sure!

Dr.Scribe

Wonderful part one of a Chapter! Please see my above replies to comments for my thoughts and theories of what would be good coming after this :) Suzette Rides again!

Dr.Scribe

Thats what I was saying, Forever in a day Part II or the Final Nights or some other title where we time skip...can students transfer? Were Fluer and Suzette offically described as in their last year at school? brought in as TA's/student teachers?

Dr.Scribe

who know what may happen in the future. I vote that maybe after we have had some time and other mainline stories wrap up instead of a epilogue chapter we get a sequel continuation of 5th or 6th year events, so like a time skip for the happy coven. Hunting the horcruxes dealing with the changes this Harems life and the increased skill and maturity Harry have on the storyline etc. So yeah hope that it's more of the last chapter has the vibes of the "I'm not going home, note really" quote from the movie but more like this is not the end not really. So a breeze through the maze, Vmort resurrection, Harry escaping but giving Tom a good make (arm blown off, silver arm replace?) and the plans for the summer visit if we even get to the third task in these last two full chapters?

GhostnKC

Would love to see a suzette vs the toad scene.

King hand axe

A great chapter

Salvage48

Kinda hoping there is a happy ending for this group

Taium

Surprised Ron throwing a tantrum didn't happen. Parvati must have threatened to castrate him. Also, forget that whole 2 chapters left deal. You can't fool me. We all know there's at least another ten chapters of Harry and the girls taking over the world. Scenes like.... Harry playing with Voldemort. Suzette v Umbridge. Fleur tearing strips off a condescending Molly. Bill striking out with Fleur. Ron somehow in caught in a tug of war between Lavender, Parvati, and Padma. Hermione moving her House Elf army on Fudge's house alongside General Dobby. Tonks being introduced, trying to tease Harry, and going into sensory overload when Suzette funnels memories of the fun times to her. And then her trying to get in on said fun. Oh, and of course we need to see Harry make the rest of the tournament his bitch and Gabby in turn starting the cult of Potter.

Basti Fortuna

Hope this group stays till the end. Though I would wish that you continue to the story up until he defeats Voldemort.

Erinnyes

Suzette for president. She's best girl, best bro, and best wingman all at the same time.


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