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30 Days: Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2023-04-07 00:58:05 +0000 UTC

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Kevin Thunder

I love the war acts. Very well done. The missions, the prep work, everything.

Kevin Thunder

I still dont like the age change but this story is probably your very best.

Kevin Thunder

Wizards dont answer to the Crown, though.

Salvage48

You could always bound the death muncher's magic and put them in muggle jail through the crown.

J.Rogue

I know it’s six chapters in already but could we get a day count in the chapters so we can see it?

FicFinder

I hope they can keep all these Death Eaters locked up. If they're all sent to Azkaban, only to be broken out soon after, it would be really annoying. I know that for the sake of the plot, both good and bad things need to happen, but I think if there was another mass breakout, then you would need to dumb down Harry, Amelia and Dumbledore for it to happen, which wouldn't be great. It says alot about how great this writing is that I'm so invested and needlessly overthinking it xD

Stephen Jennings

This is a damn good story I love it

GhostnKC

Harry Potter as minister of magic. Before this chapter I thought he would put plans together but not execute them. I am very happy to say I was wrong and am looking forward to reading more of this story

Erinnyes

You may be best known for your more spicy content, but this chapter right here is proof you know how to do character work and do it damn well. Harry was a perfect blend of nervous without being useless and indecisive, guilty over the outcomes of orders he'd given without being emo, and a hard worker without being a terminator. Awesome job.

Chichi son

“The first thing you need to do is learn nonverbal casting,” Moody continued. “You not going to get anywhere shouting out everything you’re going to do before you do it. While you’re working on that, learn as many spells as you can. Even if you don’t use them, you need to know what a spell does to know how to react. The spells you do use, you need to master. Got it?” You're not going “That said, you showed a hell of a lot of heart,” Moody said. “You got you’re arse kicked around this room for over an hour, and you never complained or gave up. Which is more than I can say for this lot.” got your arse “How long is this going to take?” An older with asked impatiently. “I have a meeting to get to.” older witch asked She stepped in a hole when we were leaving and broke her ankle. missing” x2

Sage Berthelsen

Great chapter! Hopefully some fluff in a few chapters

noru

Once again you have failed to disappoint me when it comes to this story, The way you have Harry connecting with the various wizards and witches (wink wink) is amazing and seeing a Minister that will fight for his people himself if he has to feels amazing, By far my favorite work from you.

tornadoboy

I thought the chapter could have benefitted from Harry actually meeting the wives. Or alternatively a quick look at the aftermath in a broader sense. Maybe with Evangeline's comments. But overall this was a really fun chapter. Gotta say, totally love how your story has been pure plot here. I wouldn't mind it staying like that. 30 days for celibacy for Potter wouldn't kill him xD The planning of the raid and Runcorn's betrayal were well mapped. Your use of Scrimgeour is really good too. Loving Amelia and her no nonsense comrade writing. She's not a love interest in this story and it really makes it work.


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