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Thrown Back: Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2023-04-03 22:18:47 +0000 UTC

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“Hello, Adriana,” Andromeda said as she walked up to the side of the cage. “Hey, Cissy,” Adriana smiled. “So, this is what you’ve been doing down here.” - i think you were having her refer to Andromeda? Maybe Andy/i?

KristofferXxXxX

I’ve a feeling Adriana will be the next one to join Harry’s ever growing harem/coven :3

noru

Woah loving the character development recently, amazing work as always. Really excited to see Adriana get some more screentime.

Taium

Eh, I just want Harry yelled at by a 12 year old and getting deja vu.

Chichi son

“The statement you made to the Prophet was bad either,” Narcissa told him. “I was worried when you told me about that, but you did a lot better than I expected. I wish I had been there to help you.” wasn't bad? “By taking her as a mistress, Harry is essentially staking his claim on her,” Narcissa explained. “Meaning that everyone would know that if they wanted to get to her, they’d have to deal with him. Considering his reputation and position on the Wizengamot, most people would be willing to risk incurring his wrath.” wouldn't be willing? The dog jumped into the air and did a perfect backflip before landing on his feet with a happy little yip.” extra"

Dr.Scribe

I can see where you are coming from with the benefits of a Werewolf attack survivors association pulling together forming a community that helps protect themselves from both the worst of their own kind and those who discriminate against each other. It would be hugely beneficial, unfortunately Werewolves in universe are so discriminated and downtrodden and not in packs unless they are the violent ones that they would mistrust just about everyone. So building that sort of thing would take more time of probing your in good faith and trustworthy than the few months so far. but as an eventual goal sure. you can't oppress a people and expect them to just be flipped over to good social change right away. Sylvia is understandable. No one has come to her prior to collect her ex-husbands debt, so she assumes they are safe. He blitz's her and has her dead to rights as she was reaching for her wand and still recovers and gets control despite being scared shitless once that became an option. And Harry has already involved himself in Sylvia and Amanda's lives forming an emotional bond for the little kid. So makes perfect sense would go out there and respond when that happens. Much like if a friend is in trouble you would help. This was just a deepening of that connection and introducing this fics take on the legalities of mistress/concubines to set up for Harry's Coven to be able to do things for him more legitimately (Cissy Press, Bella Enforcer, Molly a fun way to include Arthurs kink and still include her in the fun ;) that branch of Weasley's becoming Harry's lines branch family etc). Point being now with improved wards and the inclusion into Harry's circle both of ladies and political/positional friends forming a community she is involved in it does provide good protection for her and her daughter. Perhaps a bit rushed to consummate being a mistress for some but she has known him for a few months now. so I can see where your comments come from but don't see it that way. Do understand it's not your favorite chapter for those reasons though.

Dr.Scribe

Aged up like the standard with PQs fics she. Perhaps if he is a DADA Teacher and Hermione over hears the conversation about his memories with his original timeline Hermione during like 5th or 6th year we could have a fun hot for teacher moment/

Taium

Since the others were unsuccessful in browbeating you into making the Hermione one shot canon, I have an alternative request. End the story with 1st year Hermione finding out about the time travel (perhaps by overhearing Charms Professor Lily talking with Harry) and bursting into the room demanding answers. I just find the idea of a Harry that's pushing 40 getting lectured by a 12 year old hilarious.

WrexColeTrain

I hope we get to see Harry vs Nott either with words in the wizengamot or wands drawn.

Cerber

I would say this chapter was bad. Sylvias horrendous survival instincts to Harry and his girls solutions to save one victim among many. They should have started an association or union, something along the line, so they may protect each other. Harry cant keep jumping around saving one damsel after another or a poor guy around. Claiming someone as his is the best they could have thought of? Pfft! The part that seemed understandable tho, are the people being reluctant to be experimented upon. Even tho Harry and co has proven their sincerity. Then again, the magical people in general has proven themselves retarded :/


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