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Unexpected Date

🕑 Added 2023-03-29 00:45:29 +0000 UTC

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Avid Reader

I'm not normally one for OC stories, but this really was fun. I like Natalia's character development and how even at the end of the story, it remains hopeful.

Nova Sana

I recently gave this story a second read and I just wanted to applaud you. The harem fics are fun but I find that stories that focus on a primary pairing stand out more and stand up better to revisits. I love that Natalie’s back story has enough hints to flesh out the character but also has enough ambiguity that I want to read more. I don’t know if this plot line holds your interest as a creator, but if it does I would eagerly devour it!

matt tombaugh

Yes please I think it is the start of a great series.

A

This is awesome would love to see more

Katzzzz

Hopefully we get another chapter. Was great!

Salvage48

Would love to see more of this

dault3883

Would love more chapters on this story

Cateagle

A quite enjoyable story that definitely deserves further chapters or a sequel or three. I would love to see this storyline continue and develop. If Natalia was open to it, I'd love to see Fleur and HErmione join them.

Perseus999

I’ve actually never commented on a post before, but I feel like I need to here. This one-shot was absolutely amazing and I feel like if you turned it into a full blown story that it could be one of your best and most popular yet. Please consider continuing this story.

Stephen Jennings

This is a great story and like many others I would like to see this one continue

Charles Peck

I like most of the comment section would love to see this turned into a full story. Natalia is fantastic!

Draco Pendragon

I definitely want to see more of Natalia with Harry

octave

natalia is my favorite of your oc's so far she seems like a fun edition.

Josh Robbins

Curse Breaking family, I forsee them meeting Harry over the summer, some how abducting Sirius getting him a international trial, getting Harry's side of the story, checking out the scar that seems to never heal and so much more.

Gamerdood

This was great and I wish it were a mini series. Glad to see an OC and hermoine got some love in a non overly sexual way

Salvage48

I actually think this should be a series. Natalia is a well thought out and awesome character. Plz do more. This story is interesting.

Professor Quill

I wanted to mix things up.

Stonebrow

Very good. Wasn’t sure if the initial prompt would work, but it very much did.

Brutus

Fantastic as Always!

KristofferXxXxX

This deserves a sequel! I can’t help but feel like Harry would be the only man Fleur and Hermione would ever accept and love as a man and love interest. I would love to read how Natalia’s family will react to the news of her dating Harry and how the family would treat him. Would they play a major role in defeating Voldemort and his death eaters? :3

Ben Luber

Absolutely live it

Peter Howe

Another fantastic story. Hopefully a chapter 2

Stephen Jennings

I love this story hopefully there's a part 2 coming up or a full story

Jas

Love it. Hopefully a part two is in the works

Mugiwaraboy

good new story really enjoyed. hoping for another chapter but that's up to you. i kept laughing when natalia kept saying dios mio.

Josh Robbins

10/10 is it bad I want a follow up or some sort of continuation or wrap up?

norgrim

Shouldn't it be "Fleur and Cedric" at the beginning? Fleur and Krum had similar sucesses. ..... Cedric’s face was burnt .... and Fleur was whipped .....

Zitronen tee

A very nice story and we'll contained to boot. It feels like it's exactly the intended length and not like a compressed full story.

jacob hixson

this is great story plz dont make it a one shot its full length story material

Professor Quill

Nope, I'm just too much of a perv to not let Harry get with more witches.

Cateagle

A most excellent and enjoyable one-shot that deserves a sequel or three and I would not object to a side story of Fleur and Hermione's night.

tornadoboy

Nicely done. And I can't help but think you've done a really good job foresahdowing the two couples basically swinging too. Or maybe I'm just too used to your non monogamous perversities :P Brilliant oneshot!

J.Rogue

Wrapped that up nicely good stand alone

HowlerAtTheMoon

great story, kinda wished it wasn't just a one-shot

Bouttefeux Pierre-yves

Super merci

Wyatt131

Another "one-shot" I want more of. Good work quill.

Celexs

This is a fun chapter, I would enjoy seeing this continue.

Erinnyes

absolutely love it!

Chichi son

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