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Dangerous Games: Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2024-11-30 20:18:53 +0000 UTC

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J.Rogue

I like the direction you’re going with it currently but a slow burn with Daphne would be (pardon for the lack of a better word) to slow, as dumb as it sounds a medium pace seems correct from the impression I’ve gotten of her, she likes him and is not against a relationship with Harry. Her opening up to him would be able to set a medium pace, to me the fast development seems forced a good 60% of the time in other fits and it’s off putting. These are my thoughts

Daeron Targaryen

Just have the courtship take awhile you know we want it.

ThDrkWzrd142

Slow burns are what make sense for formal courtship and building love between two strangers. Old fashioned courtship doesn't have to mean no sex, though, just secretive sex. Harry having a mature woman to spell out seduction for him is also kinda like cheat codes. The thing is, friendship building is courtship. Harry and Hermione teaching Muggle stuff to Daphne and genuinely making her laugh and enjoy her time with them is fun to read. I'd encourage you to stretch explanations of book content a bit. The new perspectives on recommunicated explanations (telephone game) can be fun, as well as new character reactions to things. "You're really a Parseltongue?" (Oh shit thats really good in a lover/he's a literal snake charmer. Daphne explaining to Hermione how someone might use Parseltongue for more than talking to snakes would be a hilarious conversation.) The nice guy who lucked into a poly relationship isn't really the guy to do rapid-fire Slytherin stealing, unless he's pushed by someone who hates him into conflict. Duelling for the right to court is right there in the history books. Toying with the Pansy steal, because she's just a tool Draco uses, (She made the buttons, acts the way she does cause she gets positive reinforcement from the rich boy who is her ticket to her ambition) leads us to the question. How do you steal a devoted fan? You prove their devotion isn't respected, while also proving your just as deserving of that devotion. Death Eater wives is a curious choice. On the one hand, they are complete unknowns. On the other hand, you can basically split them two ways, both ways giving you inroads for storywriting. They're either complicit, across a spectrum of canon Narcissa to canon Bellatrix, or prisoners in their own homes, a la Merope Gaunt or this stories Narcissa Malfoy. P.S. Cissy is the name the black sisters used, for their SISter, notably insane Bellatrix. Reading Hermione call her that is odd, since Cissa seems much more sensible for a shortened name, especially outside the bedroom. Just my preference though. I kinda dislike -y nicknames.

Coady

I've always thought that Daphne provides a nice counterbalance to Hermione. She's just as smart and, unlike the Malfoys and their ilk, a true Slytherin. The two of them together are formidable.

TC

Perfectly fine! 30 was a bit too much in hindsight but I like your long stories more than the short ones :)

Professor Quill

i don't think I want to string this out that long.

TC

Im a fan of Daphne being a slower burn. Maybe she can orchestrate who Harry beds. This could be an excellent 30 plus chapter story of Harry’s amorous adventures. Only one he should maybe avoid is Ms. Zabini.

Michał W

As an avid Daphne Greengrass shipper let me tell you... don't you dare back down now! Besides who says Daphne can't be a little vindictive against other Slytherins (and her father) and all to happy to see Harry bend over her classmates mothers.

Based_Bass

I thought the opposite. Most of what I’ve read seems to be people thinking she’s just a prop to be discarded. Doesn’t mean Draco wouldn’t be pissed about it.

John7799

I see it's has that's the only fan girl he has ,if harry took her it would piss him off

Jeff

Huh, gonna have to read the rest of this.

Sidraef

Never really understood why people see Pansy as someone that Draco is attached to. She comes off as a Draco fan girl. Draco keeps her around to prop himself up. Just my thoughts on it though.

Sidraef

Courting Daphne doesn’t have to be a fast sale. A courtship can take time and even have required phases. She knows she is getting into a multi-relationship and has been raised much like Narcissa. The idea of Harry taming other “powerful” men’s wives could appeal to her. At least while they are courting.

Charles S

Stealing Pansy and Daphne would be hilarious.

John7799

Daphne is a fan favorite, but I quite like pansy (and would piss draco off more)


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