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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2024-07-15 16:02:49 +0000 UTC

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GhostnKC

Thunderstruck or Welcome to the Jungle? Both work on completely different levels

Mr.LeeII

Nice entrance and beat down of Malfoy. Snape being denied as well is awesome.

WrexColeTrain

Loving this story so far. Smashing draco for funzeys will always get an up vote from me. I am looking forward to seeing what quills got waiting in the wings for poor Snape.

Brian Jordan

Why should the Americans have all the fun? Surely the French and English can work to teach him the value of gaining skills in diplomacy and common sense. (That Malfoy desperately needs assistance in those subjects is already demonstrated.) Also, various Slytherins have a vested interest in his improving on those lines, if only so they don't look foolish for tolerating him.

J.Rogue

Eh should have hit the little shit some more

SharpShooter345

Need more lol

Soundwave8421

I want draco getting hurt by americans to be a recurring gag

TommyTheStory

Amazing as always !

Brian Jordan

Harry should thank Malfoy - though I doubt he will. Harry was able to demonstrate that he preferred to get along with the other contestants but that those who wanted trouble would be rewarded accordingly. The meeting between Fawkes and Levina was delightful by the way.

Sidraef

In the 18th century, English common law set the age of consent at 10 or 12 years old.

Stormfox2

I would love to see Fleur AND ONLY FLEUR, to join the relationship. I think Harry/Tonks/Fleur could be exciting in this story

hnbi

I don't think I've ever read a more based first interaction with Malfoy tbh.

Ryan

Great chapter - really hope this gets updated more often. Has one of my favorite hp fanfic concepts that I’ve seen

Professor Quill

I might add her for a sex scene or two, maybe, but she won't be joining the relationship. Right now, I'm just using her as an outside perspective.

Wintercolt1998 No

Nice chapter, especially the scene with the motorcycle was great. Just one question: Do you already know if you will include Fleur in the relationship?

Captain Hair

You got a bolt of lightning but didn't spring for AC/DC? I'm disappointed.

Doug Barton

Definitely "worth it." LOL Thanks for not leaving us hanging after that massive cliffie at the end of 16!

yan boul

I seriously hope that his bring major changes to Britain but always let a bitter taste this scene last the 4th year of Harry he is minor he can not participate his name comes out all of a sudden he signed a binding contract even if minor without adult has his charge who said who could.

Shannon Smacher

90 percent of what happened in that school would have been better if there was consequences.

jp9901

Amazing entrance, a pureblood beatdown, and his life(magic) being put on the line. Average year for Harry Potter

Erinnyes

Malfoy would have been so much better behaved if he'd consistently received immediate consequences for his actions. Awesome chapter, and nice job cleaning up the logic of the magical contract likelihood.


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