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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2024-07-11 16:31:47 +0000 UTC

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Brian Jordan

I was just rereading chapter 4 and noticed a brief section where Sirius and Andi were concerned that Dumbledore made only a token protest to Harry being in America. Somehow, I am even more curious about Harry's name coming out of the Goblet of Fire and just who arranged it.

SilverMugs

I think the addition of Fleur could be done well potentially. This feels like an intimate story centred around the family though, so no more than that would seem appropriate. I love how it never even crossed the mind of Tonks or Harry to go. The actual understanding that the government there and its people are hostile to Harry continuing to draw breath is rarely seen.

Brian Jordan

My curiosity is focused on how Harry's name came out of the Goblet (that it would happen was never in doubt). A separate name for whoever should have been the Ilvermorny champion seems unlikely since Harry is apparently stuck with the role (though that could have been a reasonable assumption on Dumbledore's part).

Doug Barton

Another great chapter for one of my faves. 😁 My only question, "Smiling, Harry kissed the top of her and lightly caressed ..." Top of her WHAT? I must know the answer to this! LOL

Doug Barton

Yeah, I thought that was cute. I like the way that he writes Tonks, strong and confident 95% of the time, but also very much cares about what's important to her. I'm ambivalent about adding Fleur here. I like a good Honks story, and it's one of my favorite ships, but I'm also a big Flowerpot fan. I could see a relationship developing there where Fleur values their friendship so much that it's clear to Dora that she'd never steal Harry from her, but Dora feels sorry for Fleur (because boys) and ends up willing to share. I think that could be a really good story, but I could also see a really strong story in Harry and Dora loving and supporting Fleur as friends, and helping her find her own happiness. That one line about "better than being stared at like a Parisian whore" really touched me.

J.Rogue

I don’t know, tonks seemed awfully possessive when they were at the tournament in the last chapter.

Harvey Nichols

Adding Fleur is always the right move

Victor Martinez

Always add Fleur

Jeff

Fleur? Yes, please.

Jamie Celtic

Will never say no to tonks and fleur 😉 , the way you have them written in this i think it would mesh well

hnbi

Tonks would 100% be down for Fleur joining them in bad, as would Harry.

SiriusProblem55

I think Fleur joining them would mesh well with this story

TheWickedTruth

Great chapter, I'm all for adding Fleur

Sir_dood134

Already seemed like she would be included as part of a throuple with them. She's meshing so well with them it'd be a shame not to.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Ngl I’m loving the rinks/Harry it’d be nice to read a monogamous fic maybe as a birthday present ?

Stormfox2

I would love Fleur to join in. But that should be the end it will spiral like a friend in need otherwise

SharpShooter345

I wouldn't mind fleur, the connection is there that both Harry and Tonks like her

SharpShooter345

Or Katie bell

Wintercolt1998 No

I would even add Fleur permanently but only her.

Woolleymammoth

I would Fleur & Angelina or Penelope Clearwater (age reduced to be a 7th year at Hogwarts) that way Harry has ONE girl from each of the three schools

yan boul

I'm fine with Fleur 2 his not too much especially if the 3 people in the relationship are okay what I hate to see his shit that will bring to the British Ministry lol it is over 5000km and are name it.Sould not even be connected by his but they will try it.

TommyTheStory

I just live this story!

Ryan

More is not always better don’t listen to them, however I do in this case like the idea of adding Fleur whether it’s full time or in a few scenes. Harry/Tonks/Fleur is also my favorite anyway and we’re lacking good stories with the pairing

DirtyBird

I like the idea of adding Fluer. You have the basis for friendship already set and it could flow pretty naturally.

Kurozake

I am happy as long as you don't just drop a free Hermione into the relationship. In "A Friend in Need" and "Forever in a Day" it seemed to me as if you were building pairings (Harry/Tonks/Fleur and Harry/Suzette) with some additional mostly sexual partners and then Hermione was dropped into the relationship like that free extra from a discount (Buy 2, get 1 Hermione for free).

Sidraef

I could see Harry and Tonks being great friends for Fleur. Especially with the scene you set about Hogwarts’ boys. If that blossom into more I’d love to see it have a natural course.

Matt

If u do add fleur please don't add anyone else, what makes this story so good is the connection of harry/tonks. Fleur though feels like she would fit in with them nicely

Professor Quill

I know, I've learned from that.

Wes

A couple of scenes would be ok, but I'd prefer it if you kept the relationship mostly Harry/Tonks

Ironcoil

I like the idea of Fleur needing to work really hard to get the attention of them both. I’m also really looking forward to seeing how different Hermione is given that she never met Harry. Did she make it out of Halloween intact? Is she still a student there? Will she be one of those that Harry rescues now that he will be at Hogwarts? Or is she one of the many Claws that will keep to herself? Looking forward to reading about it. Thanks!

jp9901

Keep Fleur as a friend. Keep this fic strictly Honks

Joshua Naugle

Add Fleur and only her. Her and Tonks already get along as is. Plus I like Harry/Fleur more than Harry/Tonks. Haha

Jeromey Johnson

If you do. Have it be Fleur chasing after both of them/tonks being the one she realizes she has to seduce at the same time in order to join the two. Or something like that. Wouldn’t want to see it be an easy thing…

Jas

If want you to add Fleur then it should only be tonks and Fleur . I feel like adding any more would be too much.

Captain Hair

Just remember, involving Fleur started the avalanche in A Friend in Need.

Sin Hunter

There’s never anything wrong with adding Fleur in either a lemon or just adding her into the pairing.

tornadoboy

On fleur, All I'll say is remember how friend in need eventually spiralled. I know it's tempting to add to the stable but I'd also be wary of having the beats become too similar to friend

Erinnyes

I will never vote against including Fleur. If I ever do, shoot the obvious changeling and come find me, I've been kidnapped. 😁 Great chapter!

Daemonioros

Certainly would appreciate seeing Fleur in a few threesomes with them. Seems like that could work well here.

Greensplatt

I'm 100% good with Fleur joining in

Darth Reven

More is better I honestly feel like this is perfect for Hary harem with Tonk being the main girl then could add Fleur and from hogwart girls add in Hermione as well as Susan bone then Dalphne and Padma. More is always better lol

ltibbs

Fleur and tonk stories are some of my favorites so I say yeah add her.

UnlimitedLikes

more is always better.


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