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Sticky Situation: Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2024-02-23 15:28:06 +0000 UTC

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Lettered Wolf

I've been away for months only catching up currently, but to answer your question Luna was written well here. Her line of life is more interesting when you don't know what's happening is perfectly her. As is the overly complicated way she tried to get Neville hit on.

Brutus

Excellent job with Luna <3

Nova Sana

“Are you sure?” Luna asked. “I find life is more interesting when I’m not quite sure what’s going on.” This is the line that unlocks the character of Luna for me. It justifies her signature whimsy while keeping her characterization from descending into caricature. It also leaves room for intelligence and wisdom. Love it!

Kevin Thunder

Aw! Luna's the best! I hope there's plenty more to come. You nailed her perfectly. So did Harry. 🤗

Joe Uchiha

This was a good chapter. Love me some Harry/Luna. Now that Lilith and Luna have had a taste of Harry, will they be back for more? Who will be the next to have Harry stick his beater's bat in them? Will Hermione get over her funk of giving Harry a handjob but not completing it? And how will Voldemort end up dealing with Harry fucking the girls? Will Harry fuck the rivalry out of Hogwarts? Stay tuned for more steamy smut on the next episode of...Dragon Ball Z... Wait wait...wrong outro: on Sticky Situation

J T

You did a great job on the Luna scene. Actually one of the best i have read in a while.

Rogue

That’s an idea for a story. Harry protecting and providing for Luna.

Rogue

Same. I wasn’t ready.

jp9901

Put a trigger warning if you put more Umbridge. I nearly choked on my drink from disgust and laughter!

Alatoic

So it was Luna, of course, I expected the plant be from Borneo or some other exotic and difficult place to reach. Wonder if it will only be really one week or if it will leave some side effects permanently. will be quite interesting.

Pen Jr. Jr.

Interesting new story.

orthodox1057

Luna is wonderful! Odd and eccentric in the true meanings of the words. I want to jump into the story and wring the necks of those who bully her. Harry doing it would be good enough for me.

Daeron Targaryen

Luna is so adorable.

Pelessari

I know you say you struggle with writing Luna but I love your portrayal of her. I’ve always loved how blunt she is and how easy of a friendship she and Harry have, and it makes for a very safe sexual dynamic for both of them in fanfic. Great job!

Ayessel

Yes! You did amazingly with Luna's character! Always excited for more stories featuring her

Erinnyes

I think you did an excellent job capturing Luna's demeanor and personality. Extremely fun and very sexy. Nice work!


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