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Thrown Back: Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 23:17:17 +0000 UTC

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Hadrian v.E.

Badass!

Douglas Braning

I was hesitant about reading another time travel Harry/Black Sisters harem story again but after reading and enjoying several of your other stories I had to give it a try. DAMN, this is a great story and I hope to see it finished. Along with Falling for Fleur, A Friend in Need, Slave for You and, Dangerous Game.

WrexColeTrain

Having read the edit I think the only way Harry's hissed declaration could of been more bad ass was if he did it in parseltongue so only tom would understand him. A new contender for the title of The Only One He Ever Feared either way.

Hooshu

Same, lol. I was hoping it was a new chapter, when in reality it was just an edit. Unfortunate, but eh.

Dr.Scribe

only reason I am sad to see this pop my feed again today was I was excited it might be a new chapter lol. Still really good action and momentum in the pacing in both the story and writing workflow. Cool to see the edit come in too

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Fernzyyyy

Where can I find the discord server?

GhostnKC

This entire chapter is amazing but the true chef's kiss is when Harry hissed "death". I had chills with that.

Erinnyes

Amazing chapter. Truly excellent work on the duels and the combat, and the characters throughout were great. As always, can't wait to see more of this one.

HowlerAtTheMoon

Okay, I've read it three times and still love it. Also it feels so similar to how the books talked about the issues in the ministry being useless and the Wizengamot letting way too many death eaters get away. I honestly feel like this is an AU/AT prequel to the movies!

SharpShooter345

I mean, the wizard government was always nonfunctional and useless in cannon lol

HowlerAtTheMoon

SO GOOD! I love that Harry literally made Voldemort fear him, this story just keeps getting better

Cqys

The fights are good but the political backdrop is so ridiculous that it beggers belief. It's one thing for lucius malfoy to get away with what he did in canon. He never did anything that could be traced back to him and was fairly subtle. Here he outright cast an unforgivable in full view of multiple witnesses and it just gets waved away because only his dad got hit even though Abraxas clearly wasn't the target. You also have people outright attacking multiple people at their homes and getting away with it?Avery is out here screaming about the dark lord and attacking Potter manner with over a dozen witnesses and nothing happens because of Wizengamot connections? That's too difficult to believe lol. By this point you need to have those people split off and turn it into a war. There's no realistic way that this can be shoved under the rug due to connections. You're basically showing a completely non functional government. It's minor though. I love this story. It's one of my favorites

Xavcanral

This captivating scene masterfully depicts the intense magical duel between Harry and Voldemort, reaching its pinnacle when Harry, with unwavering determination, hisses the word "Death." The atmosphere crackles with tension as Harry's words convey his unwavering resolve. Emotionally charged moments heighten the suspense, while the choreography of the magical combat is executed with skill. Harry's powerful declaration adds a profound layer to the confrontation, making it a truly memorable and impactful moment in the story. The prolonging of Voldemorts death is reasonable because if he just straight up killed him, he'd just have the same problem as it was in the original timeline. Overall, this moment is a testament to Quills skill in crafting compelling and memorable storytelling. Outstanding work!

Kasikan

I would have preferred him killing Tom. Simply because he could get the names of the other members from any of the higher up members he catches. Then he could just break into their homes and slaughter the families. It'd prevent Tom from being able to build up any forces in the future. Just slaughter any members of the government who side with the death eaters he's killing and he's set. It's not hard to take over a country and rebuild it. Revolutions do happen fairly regularly for a reason.

UnlimitedLikes

I love the fighting scenes but im missing the smut.

White Wolf

It would be funny if voldy starts fearing harry cause of him calling himself Death like that and his stopping the killing curse with hand giving voldy a reason to believe it. The fear will be of how he is avoiding death using his horcrux and death has come to take his life

WrexColeTrain

Awesome. I love your take on magical combat quill. This chapter did not disappoint at all.

dabolts

The fighting scenes in this story have been awesome.

jp9901

Voldemort must be shitting bricks now

Spacealien

Push notifications coming in clutch! Looking forward to reading this one


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