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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2024-01-13 14:21:59 +0000 UTC

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AlthosHol

I think you underestimate how loud these events can get, and how often, women and children are abducted right out of the crowds. It's not like Harry yelled help or fire, people hear shouting gun shows and mma fights all the time. People ignore it.

Fernzyyyy

Jesus is this going to be a professor X situation?

King hand axe

It was a good chapter, slightly unbelievable imo, not the magic part, just the kidnapping in general, rather than an international dueling tourney, think of it as a international gun show in amercia, then ask yourself could one person be kidnapped? Maybe, could someone witness the kidnapping, shout, draw attention of everyone nearby who currently has a gun on them, shove people out of the way trying to get somewhere and then turn a corner and be kidnapped as well?. Nope, not happening. Everyone wants to be a hero and someone shouting in an event that everyone is holding a deadly weapon will draw a lot of attention.

Cateagle

Very enjoyable chapter. I think wizarding Britain may regret calling their attention to it.

Jamie Celtic

Great chapter , but im in my 30's not a young man anymore not sure my heart can take these evil cliffhangers 😅🤣

GhostnKC

I was hoping Harry would be humbled a bit but that is harsh. However Im willing to bet he learned something while not being paralyzed.

Joshua Naugle

Hope he really isn't paralyzed. Would sort of ruin the story for me if he was because of the type of character his. Keep up the great work

jordan

Honestly, in that circumstance in time it takes for a villain to monolgue then waive his magic stick around he could've been shot 15 times. Why aren't the Americans using magic guns again? Seems superior. They come with the advantage that every shot is both faster and easier than a death spell.

jp9901

These chillhangers will be the death of me

WrexColeTrain

Ohhhh nice. Wheel chair brooms that go at mach 5 while he's recovering anyone??? Nice update quill. This is fast becoming my 2nd favourite after thrown back.

AceTrainerInc

Well then that turned dark quickly

Doobiesnax42

Good chapter, and definitely looking forward to the next one!


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