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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2024-01-09 04:53:38 +0000 UTC

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Fernzyyyy

What a seamless way of inserting that cliff hanger lol

jordan

The broom scene was literally from Iron Man, Tony Stark Harry is a fun idea, as long as he has some character growth. Now who the magical version of the Hulk? Does Tonks get zapped by a magical mcguffin to supercharge her metamorphmagus powers into a giant green rage monster?

WrexColeTrain

HATEHATEHATEHATE

FicFinder

What do you think about Harry dating Amanda?

jp9901

So next chapter is gonna be a possible Death Eater who's going to learn a valuable lesson about what happens when you get hit with a broom at Mach speed for making the dumb decision of attacking a member of Harry's family

Hooshu

One thing that I didn't really like in this whole series was Dora with other guys. I understand why it's happening, but I don't have to like it. Might have been better to just make it a footnote somewhere imo, instead of having a whole scene of it in a previous chapter. Then again, what do I know about writing. /shrug

Taium

You're not gonna see good yields on reader suffering till you get Harry's ass back to Britain Quill.

Cateagle

This bids fair to get very interesting with that last scene. I rahter suspect Harry and Sirius will have hteir hands full all too soon.

SharpShooter345

You suck.... lol

Professor Quill

Stick with me for just a little longer, he's about to get a very big wake up call. I'm starting form the beginning on this one, so I need time to let the characters grow.

Andrew Hatfield

Ugh. Still a fan of your other works and will continue to read them, but spoiled-entitled-brat-Harry is starting to piss me off. Almost gets someone killed, and his only reaction is "well maybe they'll learn their lesson for next time"? Yeah, hard pass.


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