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Grass Eaters 2 | 16 | The Real War I

🕑 Added 2024-06-21 16:47:01 +0000 UTC

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Spooker

Thanks! Yeah, I tried to make the characters and the world in my story behave believably/authentically. For some of the military tactics and equipment, I've certainly taken inspiration from real historical battles or references. And I did extensive research into some subjects like interrogations, orbital physics, tank combat...etc. so incidences of those can feel as authentic as possible. But I've also tried not to wade into current events and politics, not because I don't have personal political views, but because political critique of recent events is simply not the central point of this story. If you see similarities to recent events, many of them are likely coincidental. I guess it's an inevitability that since I'm writing a story of this nature, people are going to point out analogs. It's possible that I was inspired by real life unintentionally, but keep in mind most of these chapters were first written over 2–3 years ago. For example, just a couple of weeks ago, some of my readers on discord pointed out some parallels to events in Ukraine. But at least the entire first book and some portions of the second (including this chapter) were written before the 2022 Russian invasion of Ukraine! I've since gone back and made edits, especially to military equipment and tactics, but not huge changes to storyline to fit current events as some of my readers seemed to think. Quite the opposite, I've gone and made some minor changes for the sake of avoiding real life comparisons, especially tragedies. The last couple chapters are an example of that. Originally, the SRN terrorist attack on Mars was essentially a school shooting. After a certain real life school shooting in Texas, I decided to modify the scene to an attack on a Malgeir-human joint band rock concert. Imagine my dismay a few months ago, which was when I changed it again to its current form. I figured a decade is about as good a cut-off for that kind of thing as any. I probably won't stop all the comparisons, but an effort to be respectful has been made. Overall, it is up to the reader to interpret what they want to from the story. Death of the author and all that. I'm not opposed to my readers doing or discussing any of that. I just want to clarify at least my thought process and motivations when I wrote the story.

AnAbsoluteVillain

Seems so! Reminds me of the crab theory, that given enough time that evolution will repeat the same patterns and generate more crabs from seemingly from completely divergent branches of species... Which is of course why the navy trains against the Crustacean menace. They are out there somewhere, snippy snapping their claws through the galaxy. \/ ` >w< `\/

Jim Smith

I can understand he is a new senator, but, assuming he is literate, he should have some information about the fact that a non-human civilization has committed genocide multiple times in the past, is doing so right now, and was, or is, on a trajectory to come into contact with the Terran systems. Further, that civilization has not simply one primary system, and a few ancillary systems, but somewhere on the order of 600 systems, which is a 100 to 1 advantage, assuming that even the thinly held Earth systems could be rapidly industrialized and populated to a Sol system level in a reasonable amount of time. That is freaking out because a bee in a car stung you, ignoring the fact that 20 attack helicopters are overhead blowing up vehicles, and your vehicle is next in line. That is definitionally an existential threat, in real time, versus an admittedly rather sharp provocation. Equally, I have seen governors in the United States of America, in states that are extremely exposed to climate change ignore the subject, and decide that what bathroom someone might use is more important than things like the aforementioned serious threats to the heretofore way of life, and even mundane matters such as insurance cost making the state financially uninhabitable. While I can certainly understand that it's not all black hats and white hats, if the grey hat's actions are near functionally the equivalent of helping the black hat, nuance doesn't change the fact that someone ends up with an extra hole in the head. So well done, the character was annoying, and dangerous in a believable way. I am simply less than pleased because it is so believable, because... reality is just that bad.

Spooker

Some people are short-sighted. Humanity can be short-sighted. But human institutions can be built to be sharp to long-term threats. On the optimistic side, there have been many instances in human history where institutions or politicians did the right thing at least partially because it was the right thing to do. Doesn't always happen, but it's been known to happen from time to time. And arguably, people doing what they believe to be the right thing over cold, calculating realism happens more often than not.

Spooker

I think in an ideal future of humanity, there can be complexity and internal conflict — where people have mutually exclusive self-interests — without a reflexive distrust of (generally inclusive) institutions. This is an optimistic HFY story after all. Senator Eisson falls on a pretty extreme end of that: rhetorically, he is antagonistic against the Navy leadership, but realistically his goal is not to harm the Navy (in his mind) but rather to use it to fight the war he thinks matters more. And he is new to the Senate, elected on the back of a serious terrorist attack. What he represents is not really political corruption but rather the fluctuating sentiments of the voters in his district. And there are some underlying causes for their growing embrace of isolationism, which we'll get to in the next few chapters.

Spooker

Book 1 Chapter 29 > One of the other mechanics snorted. “Stupid grudge if you ask me. They’re not even the same species. Hell, if you asked me, the Terrans look less like the Znosians and more like one of those Granti pets that they used to keep before—” Might become more interesting later...

51sydney

I hope that all the alien species have some kind of primate that looks uncannily similar to humans. just to keep things balanced

Jim Smith

The problem is I like a Star Trek future, when we aren't necessarily ruled by idiots who are either uninformed, dishonest, or both. These politicians seem very real, almost as though I had seem them annoying me on television for years with incompetence that boarders on treason, failure to address a looming, obvious long term threat, short sided focus, assumptions of acting in bad faith on the part of other parties, and what is, if not willful blindness, an amazing ability to ignore things that won't profit them and their constituents both politically, or economically, combined with a deep distrust for institutions, but having no better alternatives. It's realistic, but so is a trip to the DMV on the worst day of the year.

Notcreepycreeper

really had fun with this chapter. Frankly, upto this point the Terran Republic was much more Star Trek than realistic on how humanity just a century out would be likely to behave. Tactical supremacy compared to 3 alien races, and much more unbelievable the common decency to look for long term solutions to problems that hadn't yet smaked them in the face.Most unbelievable, standing on the side of people against genocide atleast partially just bc thats what's right...now this senator brings us back to reality. Enjoying what's sure to be a much more complicated picture going forward

AnAbsoluteVillain

Are you going to have the buns, and doggos meet an Earth Bunnie at any point? Would be kinda of amusing to read their reaction.


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