Chapter Eighty-Six: Departure I
🕑 Added 2025-04-09 11:10:37 +0000 UTCComments
NeoJungleLover
pure talent keeping those poker faces1
SleepyKitten
Finally reading this, I love tomes and dagon hahah, I could happily eavesdrop on their hazing of néw recruits every time they do it. I love those two!! Made me giggle! Oh and esmerelda and empress definitely girlfriends then. Poor empress lost her lover though. Sad:(.
Keene
Today is the day of writing :) It wasn't coming to me over last few days, unfortunately :(
Mason
I saw that you liked my comment, but I did not look closely enough, and I got super excited because I thought there was another chapter to my surprise. It was not my utter dismay. My day has been ruined. Lol🤣
Darastrix
Hopefully tommorow we get the chappy
Bast
Theory Time: The empress was Esmeralda's lover / girlfriend. Part of Esmeralda's soul is with her, but at the end of the day, the empress wants Esmeralda back in some form
Mason
Thanks for the chapter
Kees P2
Foreshadowing? Thanks for the chapter 🍪
Ben Lockwood
Amelia, do something strange? Never! Love Amelia’s biggest concern being the children. Really makes me love her even more!
Keene
Amelia's gunna have an important request for the Empress next time they meet I think ^.^ Thanks for reading!
Keene
Thank you ^.^ writing the hazing was really fun, always a good time when Tomes and Dagon get together! As for figuring it out... Mel has a head start... depends how forthcoming she wants to be with it <3
Keene
You would think she would know to raise flags at this point ^.^ Thanks for reading!
Mutalith
Can you get married? What kind of silly question is that? Of course you can, I mean who could stop the God, I mean Amelia, from getting what she wants. Also gotta love ally Anathor just being like "GL is the best form of romance". Although Amelia will need to come up with some new super ward that can keep Anathor out so Amelia and Serena can have their alone time.
Eridor
Serena you fool! What have you done!?
Puppy Piranha Forever
Such an enjoyable chapter. So love the hazing of the new recruits! Curious how long it will take some of them to figure out just how close Amelia and Serena are. Looking forward to seeing the mass heal ceremony and what adventures the Vengeance crew will go on.
Keene
Surely it'll be fine, right? ...right?
shootingQuasar1
Good job Serena ya jinxed it...
Keene
Thanks for reading!
bladepony games
Thanks for the chapter
Keene
Thornheat sounds strangely lewd... either way, thanks for spotting and fixed ^.^
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“Lord-Prospect Thornheat,” he intoned when he saw them. “Lord Halen. Good morning.” Missing a R in heart here.
Keene
As it's partially written, should be ready in two days, as long as I keep going to the library and doing work ^.^ Thank you for the hot chocolate, and for reading!
Darastrix
For giving me a cookie, I will raise you a hot chocolate. When will the next chappy be rdy?
Keene
Oh dear, my internet-driven Americanisation has reared its yanky head once again ^.^ I'll change it!
Cormac
Ah, what a point to finish the chapter. Also, I thought you were from the UK, so shouldn't Amelia have been given a chequebook?
Keene
Thanks for reading <3
Keene
60 hour work weeks :o I hope the series helps ease that stress! Fingers crossed things get easier for you!
Garrett Cannon
glad u enjoy ur library. I work 60ish hours a week and then an extra 2 hours a day for work prep that i only have time to read.
Bast
Thanks you for the chapter! Looking forward to part two ^^