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Chapter Eighty-Three: The Final Member

🕑 Added 2025-03-29 09:58:24 +0000 UTC

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NeoJungleLover

Well that’s certainly a twist :) Lots of strong personalities are going to be on a VERY tight space for not specified amount of time, looking forward to it!

Kees P2

Thanks for the chapter 🍪

Eridor

A few questions: When Serena and her father are talking about the East potentially rebelling, are they talking about Eastern Terra Firma? I don't recall there being any mention of unrest when Amelia and Serena were in the Three Sisters( I think that's what you called Asamoto, Asamaywa, and Asamino?). What is the Sabanis Domiance? is that its own independent country? or some kinda of vassal state to Centralis?

Ornery Walrus

Can’t wait for more!

Keene

They're going to get on together like a house on fire ^.^ Poor Serena! She'd going to have a whole new source of chaos :)

Keene

Serena soon going to realise she's invited another type of idiot aboard!

Keene

Thanks for reading <3 :)

Keene

Can't wait to write it <3

Keene

Fixed, thank you, and thanks for reading!

Keene

The Dragon is an interesting character - not sure when, but I'd like to do a POV chapter with him at some point! Thanks for reading!

Keene

Finella going to be puzzled over why Serena is suddenly so much more chill! I'm sure she'll put 2 and 2 together... with the help of Mel! And thanks for the kind words, it's always nice when the plot feels organic! Thanks for reading!

Keene

Thank you, going to be fun writing their first meeting!

Puppy Piranha Forever

Such a cool chapter and really looking forward to Amelia meeting Finella.

Ben Lockwood

Yeah, she was definitely not on my radar. I am sure she will be befriended by Amelia before the day is out. No one can resist her charm!

Edward Ravenbear

I wonder if she talked to Amelia about this?

Tehd11

Went back to reread said chapter. Yeah the conversation about the captain fight really screams Serena, not that I made the connection back then. The chapter was right after a cliffhanger and did not resolve said cliffhanger making me lose interest.

Quendolayne

Hmm, I wonder if Amelia could educate them on the deployment of tanks and fighter planes? They seem awfully medieval moronic about it. Thx, for the chapter.

Lars Nordbotn

Looking forward to seeing how Finella acts on meeting Amelia and seeing her old captain changed as she is. :) Like I mentioned, I didn't guess, and was pleasantly surprised you're tying these people into the main story in this way. Felt pretty organic to me. :)

Oliver

Great Chapter and thank you for the shoutout :3 I like the talks about politics and weapons development! What I also have to commend you on is the portrayal of the Dragon. From our beloved character's POV, the Dragon is always at least a nuisance, so to speak.But looking at what he actually did and all the context around his actions (like trying to hang Serena and taking away the ground crew for what she and they did), he seems perfectly reasonable. Even now, I can at least see where he's coming from. From his POV, the weapons manufacturer told him they would need more weapons. Duh. If this weren't inside this story, I'd totally agree with him. But then again, his LS, Oshiro, is there to balance that with pessimism.

Annora D.

Thanks for the chap, and small typo ish. Good luck trying to understand Amelia, Serena thought. Her girlfriend wasn’t someone you so much understood as you experienced. I think the last sentence is supposed to go, her girlfriend wasn't someone you understood so much as you experienced.

Garrett Cannon

cant wait to read about war veteran serena before she became a softie meeting amelia

Bast

Thanks for the chapter! :)

Captain2003Rex

I had to go reread that chapter just to remember who she was, I’d completely forgotten about her lol. I find myself really wondering tho just what it was she did that had gotten so out of hand that she struck her commanding officer. Like, she said that she was trying to push some buttons in the hopes of getting Serena to loosen up, but that still doesn’t tell us what actually happened. Oh well, guess we’ll find out when she and Amelia meet each other and team up to make Serena clutch her horns lol.

Darastrix

Can I get a refresher on this character?

Chris Wong

Woo! Thank you for the chapter! Can't wait to see how she gets on with Amelia - their personalities seem like there won't be any issues (much to Serena's horn pulling I imagine!)

Tehd11

Never in a million years would I've guessed her. Especially since the first chapter she appeared in bored me out of my mind and I just skimmed through it.

StapleLizard

Oh boy, early tanks and acoustic/wake seeking torpedos. I am loving the background innovation happening in this interwar period. I wonder if something similar to the Washington Naval Treaty will be signed to limit capital ship size/number?


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