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Chapter Seventy-Three: Bitter Truths
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It didn’t take long for the city to return to its usual ebb and flow.
After a few weeks, the broadsheets stopped reporting on the event. Photographs of Amelia’s embodiment of Suijin were no longer sprawled across the front pages. Instead, with the capital of the Republic, Meppen, fallen, the war retook its usual spot in the headlines. Every night, celebrations could be heard lasting until the early hours of the morning.
Serena heard it discussed everywhere, from the students to the instructors to the shop workers and their customers. They all said the same thing.
The war was ending.
After a month, the fire was a distant memory to the citizens of Asamaywa.
The construction effort was moving along well. The work of the earth mages was finished, and the bulk of the remaining tasks were contracted to various companies under the umbrella of the Asamaywa guilds. Steam-driven cranes littered the lowlands, each one replacing the work of an aura user, and hundreds of civilian workers buzzed around the site, fulfilling their roles diligently.
Amelia had stopped coming down, but only at the behest of Serena, the academy, and Greatlord Oshiro himself. Over the last month, the face and name of Lady Thornheart of the Lowlands had become so well known that Amelia began needing a protection squad when travelling. Not because she was in danger, but because the citizenry would constantly approach her, delaying her schedule again and again. Most citizens were polite, simply wanting to pay their respects, but many tried to persuade Amelia to heal them or their loved ones with a story of sorrow and pain.
It had been hard, but Serena had convinced Amelia not to heal everyone who approached her with an ailment. Serena emphasised that if she did, she would never be able to walk freely; she would be mobbed wherever she went. Sure, Amelia could disguise herself with Kanaxai spellwork, but her healing was such a notable signature of who she was that it wouldn’t take long before people put the two together.
While Amelia agreed, she explained very clearly that she wouldn’t refuse to heal anyone on that principle; she just couldn’t bear to see the suffering she’d seen in the lowland slums. If, in her words, the Greatlords of the East didn’t want her causing political problems, then they should fulfil their duties in ensuring the bottom rung of society could at least survive.
Amelia’s tone had been angry saying that. Even so, Serena couldn’t find it in her heart to correct her.
The slums had been far worse than she could ever have imagined.
Lord Kanamori had been quietly removed from his position as Lord of Asamaywa Station and its surroundings. He hadn’t had his lordship revoked but was encouraged to relocate to his new territory, a minor mining village somewhere in the mountains.
Essentially, he was exiled.
And, if the rumours were true, his wealth had been seized to contribute to the reconstruction under the guise of a donation. It was a tactful amount of political manoeuvring that left a sour taste in Serena's mouth. If an officer under her had demonstrated even a fraction of Lord Kanamori’s corruption, she would have had them hanged.
Since it was understood that if Amelia were restricted too heavily, she would likely just do another chaotic healing event anyway, an agreement was made so that she would repeat another mass healing event before they left Asamaywa.
To minimise intra-Empire political fallout, Cascadian Lords from all corners were invited to the event. Greatlord Oshiro explained that the Overlord was being careful and had weighted the invitations proportionally across the Empire. Serena understood it as a delicate balancing act; the East wanted to maximise Amelia for themselves but couldn’t be seen as trying to hoard her.
According to an aethergram her Father received from Nina, more than a hundred Centralis-registered ships had purchased travel visas for the Three Sisters, and hundreds more were waiting for paperwork. With all the public docks in the Three Sisters booked until the event, people resorted to getting travel routes approved for the nearby Nai and even Nachon, where they would get a train or shuttle to Asamaywa.
The prices of accommodation and private docking space had increased by more than a factor of ten. This wasn’t just due to people desperate to receive Amelia’s healing; many wanted to witness the event for bragging rights.
Amelia didn’t like the sound of people being charged up to their horns for just a chance to see her. Still, her complaints stopped when Greatlord Oshiro pointed out that the increased revenue – from what Serena called Amelia-tourism – was paying for the lowland to be rebuilt.
“The topic has caused more than a few heated arguments in the House of Commons,” Greatlord Oshiro explained one day at his estate. He had been summoning both Serena and Amelia frequently over the weeks. They stood in an ornate reception room, where paintings of landscapes and flowers adorned the walls. It was a room designed to make the occupants feel relaxed. “The delegations have nearly come to blows on more than one occasion,” Greatlord Oshiro continued.
“How does the rest of the Empire view Amelia?” Serena asked.
“Centralis is… welcoming. The North isn’t. Sentiments built up over the war will take time to cool. They don’t like a human taking such a prominent position in the Empire.” Greatlord Oshiro glanced at Amelia standing nearby, who just shrugged in response. “The South believe Amelia was behind the Suijin embodiment and aren’t happy that the East has a claim to such a large part of their heritage through a human.”
“They… know?” she asked, raising an eyebrow.
“An intelligence document was leaked to the North. It was presented in parliament.”
She frowned. “They just let that happen?”
“You’ve never attended parliament, have you, Lord Halen?”
“No.” As a Cascadian Lord, Serena had a right to attend the House of Lords and make her voice heard. Typically, it wouldn’t be done without the permission of their Lord Superior, but occasionally, a Lord might bypass the normal etiquette as a form of protest if they thought their Lord Superior wasn’t listening to them.
“Both Houses have the same rules in that they cannot prevent a member from sharing information. The Northern delegation got part of the early report that named Lord-Prospect Thornheart as Suijin’s Speaker.”
“Is it possible Intelligence leaked it intentionally?” Amelia asked, blinking innocently.
“Perhaps,” Greatlord Oshiro answered. “But the papers won’t report on it. They know they need permission to reveal a Speaker’s name. Someone may want this information to filter back to the human continent. I can see it cooling the temperament of the human nations. For a while, at least.” He was silent for a moment, then continued, “Still, our official position is to deny the allegation, so I expect you both to do the same.”
“O-okay!” Amelia nodded seriously.
“Yes, Greatlord,” Serena intoned with a bow.
“There is something else,” Greatlord Oshiro said, producing two letters. “There will be an award ceremony for those who risked their lives or otherwise contributed greatly to putting out the fire. I’m sure it shouldn’t be surprising for either of you to find out you’ll be awarded. Here.” He passed the letters over, and after seeing his affirmative nod, Serena opened hers and read it.
“A… Gold–” Serena swallowed and tried again. “A Golden Horn?”
“Yes,” Greatlord Oshiro stated. “One hundred and thirty Bronze Horns, Forty Silver Horns and eight Golden. Two of which are going to you two.” He frowned. “It’ll be a long ceremony. You’ll be going last.”
“What’s a Golden Horn?” Amelia asked.
“It’s the highest civilian award in the East,” Greatlord Oshiro explained. “It entitles you to a modest yearly sum for ten years and to own land in Asamaywa Proper. As a Lord-Prospect, you already have that right, of course. If such a reward feels insufficient…”
Amelia began shaking her head.
“...Then know this Golden Horn will only be for your miraculous healing that saved the lives of so many. We can’t reveal your role in Speaking Suijin, but we can reward you for it. So.” The greatlord cleared his throat. “Lord-Prospect Thornheart, for saving Asamaywa Station by extinguishing that terrible inferno… you’ll be awarded a modest estate in the city.” Greatlord Oshiro politely coughed. “You’ll be able to move in the moment the paperwork is signed.”
“Y-you’re giving me a house!?” Amelia’s eyes grew as wide as a peeka spotting a mouse. “Thank you!” She bowed deeply. “Thank you!” She turned to Serena. “Did you hear that? A house! All for me!”
Serena couldn’t help but smile at Amelia’s enthusiasm, but something Greatlord Oshiro said made her suspicious. After all, city estates don’t spring up out of nowhere. This award was either planned in advance, or it was…
“Greatlord Oshiro, this estate,” Serena began tentatively. “It wouldn’t happen to be…?”
“Lord Kanamori’s previous holdings, yes.” The greatlord nodded. “Lord-Prospect Thornheart contributed more to the lowlands in one night than Lord Kanamori ever did in years. Awarding her his seized estate is as much a symbolic gesture as a worthy award. You won’t inherit his staff or his furnishings—those are to be auctioned off to pay for his failure—so I would encourage you to find some replacements to manage and guard the property while you’re away from the city. I’m sure Lord Halen here can give you some good recommendations.”
“Mmm!” Amelia couldn’t stop grinning. “Thank you!”
It might have been a trick of the light, but for a moment, Serena swore the greatlord’s mouth curled slightly. It seemed that even he wasn’t immune to Amelia’s infectious cheerfulness.
“Wear something formal for the ceremony, and…” Greatlord Oshiro produced a necklace Serena immediately recognised, for she wore something similar around her own neck. “Wear this as well. There will be clergy representatives there, and if they see you wearing the symbol of the demon church as opposed to the human one, it’ll make our lives much easier and silence a large part of those opposing your appointment as Lord-Prospect.”
“Okay…” Amelia frowned a little but took the necklace. “Anything else I need to know?”
Greatlord Oshiro discussed the ceremonial procedure with Amelia for a few more minutes before requesting that she leave so he could discuss a few matters in private with Serena.
Once Amelia had bowed and cheerfully stated, “I’ll be waiting outside!” Serena and Greatlord Oshiro were alone.
“Tea?” he asked.
Serena accepted. It would be rude not to.
Soon, an unusual fragrance filled the room.
“Manwese earth-tea,” Greatlord Oshiro explained, passing her a cup. “Please, sit.”
They both sat down on two couches, facing each other with a low table in between.
Serena brought the cup to her mouth, smelling the tea.
She tried not to wrinkle her nose.
It was… earthy.
“Unpleasant, isn’t it?” the greatlord said with a smile, taking a slow sip. “It was recommended to me by the Lord Guardian. He assured me it would grow on me.” He took another sip before placing his cup down. “Perhaps you’ll have better luck. Nevertheless, we sometimes have to swallow unpleasant truths, don’t we?” He paused momentarily before asking, “How is your preparation?”
“Preparation?” Serena questioned, taking a sip. The tea didn’t taste any better than it smelled. She placed the cup down.
“For your promotion exam.”
“Oh!” Serena raised a hand and coughed politely. “I’m dedicating a lot of my time to it, Greatlord. Between that, my obligations at the academy and training exercises with the Vengeance, I barely have enough time to sleep.”
“Lucky for you then, to have Lord-Prospect Thornheart to heal away that tiredness.”
“The moons have blessed me,” Serena intoned, lowering her chin humbly.
A slightly too-long silence developed between them.
Here it comes, Serena thought. What he really wanted to talk about.
“She’s a realm-traveller, isn’t she?” Greatlord Oshiro asked.
“Ah…” Serena mumbled before clearing her throat. “I cannot say.”
“Neither could Vikram when I asked him. His refusal was enough of an answer anyway, as was yours.” The greatlord picked up his cup of tea, taking a slow, unpleasant sip. “I always wondered why I was encouraged not to look into her background too deeply.” He chuckled to himself. “I was surprised when I realised. Such a far-fetched, insane conclusion that became more obvious the longer I entertained it. The human nations will likely figure it out, especially once the Suijin embodiment inevitably leaks.”
What could she say? What should she say?
“It is strange, though,” Greatlord Oshiro continued. “It was always my understanding that there are divine accords that are supposed to prevent such”–he frowned as if trying to find the right word–“anomalies from happening. Regardless, we are lucky she fell into our hands and not our enemies’. With her vast power, backed by such an innocent and vulnerable personality, I dread to think how the war might have gone if she were turned against us.” His expression tensed before asking, “Do you know if she’s capable of the Third-Word? Has she given any indication either way?”
The Third-Word. The peak of divine communion. The power that allowed the Empress of Demonkind to defeat the Enemy and establish an Empire spanning the majority of the Cascadian continent. The power that created the Shattered Islands. The power of a demigod. Serena knew little about what it actually entailed; even the details of how Second-Word embodiments worked was knowledge not easily accessible to the average person. Information regarding the Third-Word was a closely guarded secret.
“I don’t know…” Serena answered. “I don’t know where her limits lie. We’ve briefly spoken on the matter. She doesn’t seem to have any interest in even trying it.” Greatlord Oshiro seemed relieved to hear that, so she added, “She’s new to the Second-Word and she fears losing control or accidentally doing harm.” It was more or less the truth. Amelia told Serena that she could invoke the Third-Word in the game she played, but wasn’t sure if it could be done in reality. “If I may…” Serena asked. “What do you know about the Third-Word, Greatlord Oshiro?”
“That’s a bold question for a Lord,” Greatlord Oshiro replied, his eyes narrowing.
“Forgive me, Greatlord.” Serena swallowed. “I was merely… curious.”
“If you want to know the answers, then serve our Overlord well and work your way up the hierarchy.” Greatlord Oshiro sniffed, tapping the side of the sofa. “If only to satisfy your curiosity, I’ll tell you this.” He leaned forward, his voice low. “The Third-Word works differently from the others. That’s all I’ll tell you.”
“I… Thank you, Greatlord.” Serena bowed her head, knowing she shouldn’t push any more. Greatlord Oshiro likely had a reason for sharing even that with her.
“I did want to speak with you about her healing powers, especially her initial healing of the slums. I didn’t believe it until I saw it myself, but she even cleaned the area. Every spot of dirt, grime and dust was vanquished. That alone is almost as impressive as the healing. Can she separate the two? Can she heal without cleaning her target of all imperfections?”
“Yes, Greatlord.” Serena nodded.
“Then why did she clean the slums as well?” The greatlord’s expression suddenly took on a strange emotion Serena couldn’t identify. Was it her imagination, or was there an element of… sadness in his eyes?
“She wasn’t in full control,” Serena answered honestly. “She was… emotional at the sight of the orphanage's children being in such a state. I don’t believe she did it intentionally.”
“Hmm…” Greatlord Oshiro rubbed his chin. “Her cleaning might have been more thorough than she intended. It wasn’t just dirt and grime from skin and stone but also grease and oil from metal and crystal. You must have her practice control. You can’t have her accidentally clean the Vengeance’s engines of their lubricant. Do you understand, Lord Halen?”
So, Amelia cleaned the machinery in the lowlands as well! Serena didn’t know Amelia’s magic could do that, but Greatlord Oshiro was right; it could be catastrophic for a ship! The lift engine would be fine, but the propulsion engine, with its many moving parts, would quickly overheat and possibly even explode if Amelia accidentally removed the lubricant keeping it–
Serena froze, and her mouth momentarily dropped open before she remembered to close it.
A question needed to be asked.
A question she didn’t really want the answer to, but she had to know.
“Greatlord…” she began tentatively. “The lowland fire. Was it truly… due to a baker's oven?”
“Hmm…” He tapped the couch’s armrest. Once… twice… thrice. “The report we produced stated the origin of the fire was a baker’s oven, so…” His expression darkened. “The origin was a baker’s oven. I suggest not questioning the official report any more, Lord Halen.”
“Of course, Greatlord,” Serena said.
“I’m merely doing my duty and raising a point of concern regarding her powers that may have an accidental detrimental effect on your ability to carry out your duties.” Greatlord Oshiro explained. “Make sure you take adequate measures to prevent any future complications, Lord Halen.”
“Yes, Greatlord.”
She must never know, Serena thought. I must never tell her.
Greatlord Oshiro took another sip of the earth-tea and Serena copied him. Still unpleasant. “How is life in the academy?” he asked, his expression softening as if the previous topic had never been discussed. “Have you found any promising talent? Surely that Melanie Mori girl meets your standard?”
“Yes, Greatlord, along with some others.” Serena swallowed. “I do have some concerns. Given the seriousness of my future duties, I can’t help but question the rationale behind forming a new group of softhorns. Even if they are talented in their abilities, they lack the wisdom of age and experience of real combat. I find myself wondering if it wouldn’t be better to bring in some veterans instead?”
It was a question that had been troubling her for a while. The original justification provided by Chesterfield was that they wanted an elite team that could work with Amelia with no existing bias against humans. Only… Serena had seen demons like Highlord Driss and Flakken Holm, both from the North, be capable of putting their biases aside. How hard would it be to find veteran officers to do the same?
“Good deduction,” Greatlord Oshiro intoned. “The lack of existing biases is more of a happy coincidence. Why, then, do you think it was so important for us to get her into an academy and help scout a team of demons more or less her age?” He raised an eyebrow, signalling he wanted her to arrive at the answer herself.
“Because…” Serena began, her mind racing to connect the dots. Why had they put Amelia in an environment around budding trainee officers and not integrated her into an experienced elite squad? Why did they want her to take an active part in forming a new team?
Why had he emphasised the words ‘her age’?
“Friends…” she answered. “No, not just friends. Connections.” She felt her eyes widen at the realisation. “Connections,” she repeated. “You want to bind her to the Empire.”
“That’s right.” Greatlord Oshiro’s eyes glinted dangerously. “She’s a human in a world of demons. It’s natural for her not to fit in. The last thing we want is for her to leave our clutches. She must be bound to the Empire. Not by chains of force, but with things more powerful. Just as a great ironwood tree burrows its roots into the earth, we want Amelia to do the same. We want her roots of friendship to run deep, her sense of loyalty and duty to her squadmates to trap her, and her relationships to make her never consider leaving. In that sense… you’ve done well, Lord Halen.”
Ah, that was right. Greatlord Oshiro would have read all the intelligence reports detailing just how close Serena and Amelia were. However, it seemed that any moral concerns he might have over the matter were irrelevant when it came to the much more important goal of binding Amelia.
“I’m not sure how to respond…” Serena mumbled. She didn’t like thinking of Amelia as a thing to be bound. Still, her mind, trained by years of rational and practical education, further developed by her battlefield experience, couldn’t deny the cold logic before her.
Even if, like the tea, it left a sour taste in her mouth.
“Ruthless, isn’t it?” Greatlord Oshiro replied. “Don’t view it from the point of view of Serena Halen, but from the point of view of Lord Halen, servant of our Overlord and the Divine One. It’s not like anyone wishes the girl any harm. Quite the opposite, we are all immensely invested in keeping her happy. In a matter of a few months, she’s become one of the Empire’s most important strategic assets, and our actions must reflect that. The Western Overlord has recommended Vikram to fully sanction her lordship.”
What!?
“What!?” Serena burst out before quickly correcting her tone of voice. “Sorry, Greatlord.” She readjusted her position on the couch, resisting the urge to stand up and pace. “If I may ask, why?”
“It came out in parliament a few weeks back. An official request.” The greatlord shrugged. “The justification is her actions during the fire. It’s not without precedent, but it's certainly unusual for the West to put their horns out like this. She also has an official invitation to visit the Western Terra-Firma, so you’ll have no trouble getting a travel visa should your duties take you in that direction.”
“I see…” Serena trailed off, absorbing the information. A part of her wanted to ask what the Greatlord knew about the ever-mysterious Western Overlord but figured she’d pushed her luck far enough.
However, there was one question left.
“The necklace you gave her for the ceremony, what’s the meaning behind that?”
“Oh, that?” Greatlord Oshiro stood up, walking to the window where he stood with his back to her. “That’s for the visiting cardinal. They're going to canonise her as a saint, and if she can be seen as honouring the demon church, it’ll erase the last bit of resistance.”
Serena’s hands started reaching for her horns but, by a mighty effort, she was able to stop from embarrassing herself. Instead, she stood up, and after forcing herself to take a few breaths, asked, “You’re not jesting? They truly mean to make her… Saint Amelia?”
“The lowlanders already call her by that name, so it won’t change much,” came the answer from the window. “Friends. Relationship. Homestead. Titles. Duty. Loyalty…” The greatlord coughed. “And now religion. Each one an attempt to integrate Amelia Thornheart into the institutions of our Empire.”
“I’m not sure she would agree to it,” Serena pointed out. “It’s not the kind of thing she would want. The extra responsibilities might be too much for her.”
“There won’t be any extra responsibilities. She only needs to take the title officially. With that, she’ll become a famous symbol of the Empire, and that’s what’s important, that she’s of the Empire.” Greatlord Oshiro turned to face Serena. “It’s a lot, but you’ll be leaving soon for a new Terra-Firma. It’ll be a well-deserved change of pace for both you and our city.”
“I… see. What about her lordship?”
“We have to wait at least a year, regardless of the opinion of another Overlord. There are plenty of Lord-Prospects in the East who have been waiting for five years or more. It’s too risky to inflame them, especially with how delicate the situation in the Far East is already.”
“I see,” Serena said softly. In all honesty, her brain was overheating from so many repeated revelations. She should be delighted for Amelia, happy that she was going to move up so quickly in the ranks of the Empire. But she wasn’t. Not because of jealousy or envy, but because she was worried too much too fast would put undue stress on her girlfriend.
There she was again, instinctively putting Amelia ahead of the Empire.
Why didn’t it feel wrong?
She felt like she needed a holiday. Somewhere far away, somewhere where she and Amelia could just…
Hmm?
“You mentioned a new Terra-Firma,” Serena pointed out. “Do you know where our next destination is?”
“Yes, but it’s not for me to say,” came the reply. “Although… I’ll give you a hint…” The Greatlord’s voice took on an amused tone.
“Prepare for somewhere warm.”
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Thanks for your patience everyone, especially as the chapter is a day late. Despite sitting down for 6 hours my creativity wouldn't switch on!
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Comments
NeoJungleLover
I wouldn’t be surprised for her to refuse just bc it’s embarrassing or smt
NeoJungleLover
Don't forget about girlies! God I love all woman
Keene
There are a few times I've laid it out more explicitly, like in the moonrain chapter: > “Yeah, First-Circle, Second-Circle and so on. From a bird's eye view, the floors of the tower would be circles, right? And there are twelve: three circles of magic for non-Speakers, three after the First-Word, three after the Second-Word, and three after the Third-Word. Makes sense, right?” Basically, the first three levels of aura or magic (circles) are accessible without Speaking. Then the 3-6 levels require the First-Word 7-9 Second-Word and 10-12 Third-Word I think it might be a good idea to go back and emphasis it more in early chapters also. Sorry for the confusion!
Sean
I'm very confused by the third word stuff. The way I initially remember the words being introduced sounded like they were a kind of progression system. I was thinking she knew 'all the words' which meant she could go to third, and then fourth, fifth, sixth... up to Tenth where she would be something like... This is a silly example but like Super Saiyan God. Temporarily divine until she released the word.
Malir Blackspear
Have reread it like four times now out of a desire to think about truths that do not exist to help people.
Malir Blackspear
This chapter has a surprising amount of Things to think about.
Edward Ravenbear
While I understand that point. For a normal Lord-Prospect, she is far from normal and done things to benefit the Empire no one else can. That is why I say it is insulting. If the only thing someone has to to do is wait 5 years keeping thier nose clean and tow the party line to become a lord, it is then insulting to those who do truly great things and still have to sit behind they rabble just so the rabble will not get thier tiny little feelings hurt. If she was a Demon then I think it would be a whole other story. Look at Marcus Cassius Scaeva he was the lowest of the low in the 8th Legion. Barely above cannon fodder. After one battle were he did some truly impressive things he went from the very bottom to Centurion, something that on average took 10 to 20 years to achieve. I hope you do not take this as a dis of your story. It is not, far from it. When I read a story I truly like I try to feel what MC feels etc. Really immerse myself in the MC and story. And if this was me I would be pissed. Thinking what else do I need to do to get some respect, bring the dead back it life, water to wine, make food fall from the sky? I know she is carefree and modest, that said everyone wants respect for what they do. All they do is keep throwing more dampers on what she can and can't do. In effect a gilded cage.
UnderwhelmingBird
I had a few moments of being horrified of Amelia's potential reaction to realizing her involvement, right up until I remembered that point you brought up. It was the previous Lord who set the dominos up, all she did was make them fall a little earlier. If you think back, they've been burning wood for heat during Winter, which was rapidly approaching. The difference between the fire happening now, and happening a few months into Winter is Amelia and co. being there to help with the aftermath. Framed appropriately, without taking on more guilt than need be, it's more of a neutral event. As stated in previous chapters, people were very freshly healthy enough to skedaddle and the weather not quite bad enough to cause them to freeze during their escape. I suppose the only thing that changed was whether she was tangentially the cause of a fire or directly, though through secondary effects. When you go to start up machinery, for industrial processes, you absolutely are supposed to do cursory checks. The culpability remains shared.
Chosen Juan
Saint Amelia! I could totally see this backfiring in the politicians eyes, as Amelia would have her Title of Saint to lean on as she heals anyone and everyone she feels like… ( feel free to steal that idea Keene ;P )
Bast
The south would make sense as a travel destination. They are interested because of Suijin, and seem to be politically on the side of the North. A bit of appeasing via the Amelia treatment (TM) will probably do a lot with pushing the political agenda
Lin14
Amazing chapter, thank you! I love how realistic these plot lines are. Unintended side effects from good actions in this case. The complexity and realism of your characters and plot lines make this one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Along with your awesome world building of course! It makes this fantasy world feel like a real place with real people with real motivations, not just a backdrop built around the main characters. I find that this level of writing is hard to find, both in online formats and published novels. I appreciate your hard work!
Ben Lockwood
I am guessing Yiannis. Something at the back of my mind says that location was important. Also! Thanks for the chapter. its an interesting thought that Amelia's healing and cleaning has unintended consequences. Another opportunity for her to mature.
Arkus86
Another argument is, as was noted repeatedly, the slums were a huge fire hazard regardless, a disaster waiting to happen. In that, it is fortunate it happened while she was there. If it had happened any other time, and it *would* have happened, sooner or later, the consequences could have been far worse.
SleepyKitten
Amazing chapter ^^, I really liked the revelation that she was potentially the cause of the fire. And serena swearing to never tell her was very sweet. It could be a serious issue for amelia due to her very kind personality. To be responsible for so much death would be a massive burden on her psyche. Though I feel like such a potential plot point for drama will be used eventually.
Boris
Nice chapter. That tea certainly fit the orbital bombardment Serena received xD whether she went -> wherever You want ~her~ to bind her to the Empire every-mysterious Western Overlord -> ever
Keene
My understanding is the Lords of the East have to play a careful balancing act with their own internal politics and the greater politics of the Empire and beyond. There are consequences for their actions, and the process to graduate from a Lord-Prospect to a Lord is more than just "Do one amazing thing" -> There is an expectation of showing good character and actions over a long period of time.
Edward Ravenbear
Ok, this is really bothering me. Why is she not made into a full Lord by now? She sure as hell has done enough to earn it. And this hush hush about what she did when the cat is out of the bag makes not logical sense. Honestly I think they are being very insulting to her and she is to navie to see it.
Keene
Fixed, thank you <3
Keene
Fixed <3
Bast
Theory on the Third Word "working differently": Maybe those words are like unclaimed divine domains? That way, the person themselves would become partially divine themselves, which would make sense with the Titanic forms Amelia mentioned in some previous chapter
Kasper Lynderup Jensen
She is at most at fault for one building burning down. Where the fire startet. The rest is poor city planning and terrible fire safety. She even commented on it. I don't know if she would see it like that, but while at first glance she may seem like the type to put the world on her shoulders, I don't think she actually is. She wants to help, but don't seem to be on a mission to never rest before everyone have been helped.
Aldous Russell
Time for the swimsuit episode!
Puppy Piranha Forever
Just dawned on me Amelia‘s cleaning ability might also play a role in how fast the fire broke out. I can easily see her cleaning ability, removing the ash used to bank a fire, to possibly removing rusty parts from metal fire boxes, thus exposing the surroundings to open flames. This would cause multiple fires simultaneously to flare up in the huge fire hazard that the slums were.
Bast
Thanks for the chapter! The source of the fire being Amelia's cleaning is something that would clearly give her a lot of grief, but objectively it's something that would have happened sooner rather than later. Both the layout and cheap-and-more-dangerous means of warming and light mean much higher risks of starting fires. Look at how often London burned down. That said, we don't even know if Amelia was the cause here. It's just not proveable nor disprovable. But it is ammunition for anyone wanting to attack her.
Cormac
Amelia has made in very plain that she has no connection to the human church. If she doesn't do the same with the demon church, her name and status as a saint would be used as a tool by Cascadia in international relations. Which I don't think she would want. So she should tell this cardinal to shove the sainthood up his arse.
Puppy Piranha Forever
Annora D.
Thanks for the chap, also minor typo missing quotation mark. “There is something else,” Greatlord Oshiro said, producing two letters. There will be an award ceremony for those who risked their lives or otherwise contributed greatly to putting out the fire. I’m sure it shouldn’t be surprising for either of you to find out you’ll be awarded. Here.” He passed the letters over, and after seeing his affirmative nod, Serena opened hers and read it.
Garrett Cannon
OMG this is everything i wanted Keene great job. I cant wait to see what u write next. I would love to watch amelia struggle with "mist walking" in the shimmer maybe give us more of the super cool big brother vibes of lord guardian teaching her. I also hope Katelynn joins them somehow with maybe a journey to fight some strong demons in the west.
Malir Blackspear
Hung -> hanged
