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Chapter Seventy-One: Suijin's Return

🕑 Added 2025-02-18 00:39:34 +0000 UTC

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Keene

It's working for me, can you double-check?

Bast

The lower previous / ToC / next links seem to not be working here

NeoJungleLover

I beg to differ that godzilla level transformaction is something special ;D

chest25

Eh, amelia can just command the water to not do that

Lin14

This fic is my current obsession lol. I appreciate your hard work!

Bast

I just noticed: A plane of water that massive would probably generate powerful gusts of wind / pressure pockets. After all, the air can't really go upwards without braking through the layer of falling water. Not that it brakes the immersion or anything. I love both the scale and the simplicity of extinguishing the fire.

Keene

Five times! What a compliment! Thank you, and thanks for reading <3

Lin14

Awesome chapter, thank you! I’ve read it like 5 times now and I can’t wait for more 😁

Keene

Oh, of course! I doubt we'll see a direct POV of it, but I'm sure the event will be referenced in the future at some point o.0

Ben Lockwood

The two parliamentarians duel with pistols at dawn!

Keene

Ah, thank you for the concern :). I'm thinking the weekend would serve as a break between the Friday release and the Monday one. I'll be careful not to burn out! Good idea on building a backlog behind the patreon backlog lol

Keene

Thanks for the suggestions - I do like putting commas everywhere xd And thanks for reading! <3

Keene

I tried to capture the chaos lol Thanks for reading! :)

Keene

May she live as long as the moons! Thanks for reading <3

Keene

Thanks for reading! What duel are you talking about exactly? ^.^

Keene

Something I should aim to explore more next chapter(s) for sure. Thanks for reading!

Keene

It was an inspiration yes! Thanks for reading :)

Keene

Hmm I'll take that feedback on board, maybe flesh it out more in the future. Thanks for reading! ^.^

Keene

Thank you! Can't wait to write Serena going to town on Amelia's cheeks xd

Keene

Amelia being Amelia is causing arguments thousands of miles away lol. Thanks for the kind words, and for reading :)

Keene

Thanks for reading! <3

Keene

Amelia took on Suijin's embodiment as a (powerful) Second-Word. Third-Word is something special ;) I'm sure we'll get further answers about it some point in the future! Thanks for reading <3

Maku90

Thanks for the chapter! I love this story and seeing the politics of the Empire is great worldbuilding. I saw on SH that you plan to do a regular schedule and that's good. My suggestion is that you also put in planned rest in the schedule, to avoid burning out and to keep the high quality of the story. It could be a week off per month or even just skip 1 chapter, that'up to you. The important thing is that you can rest without feeling guilty about not releasing a chapter ( or if you don't need the rest you could still write the chapter and build a backlog for when you actually need rest). That said keep up the good work! Good Luck!

Bast

Also added a few suggestions. I'm not a native speaker, though, so take them with a grain of salt

Bast

Thanks for the chapter! I liked the political part, it was very well written ^^

Fotia

I loved this chapter. Sums up the House of Commons very well. All the insults and shouting are even there in the real life one lol

Chris Wong

Praises to the empress for giving us this chapter!

Ben Lockwood

Its good to step back and appreciate that this a fully functional world. Makes everything a bit more real. Though I would love more of our lovable idiots, this was fun to. Also, I really want to know what happens with the duel!

Garrett Cannon

O i didnt even think about suijin being a third word of power. Plus amelias form of suijin was huge aswell. That would be sweet

Garrett Cannon

Whew a political treat. I would also like a zoom in on what the east specifically thinks before they got to this point.

PatronTurtle

Very interesting portrayal of internal politics. Feels very English to me

Malir Blackspear

That was rather annoying. Wish we had more time with Water!Amelia rather than cutting to Parliament so early in that story.

SleepyKitten

Amazing as always, so many new characters introduced. Must be one greatlord in there. Thanks for chapter ^^, can't wait to see what happens to amelia next hahah. Probably alot of cheek squeezing from her dear Serena.

Puppy Piranha Forever

So love the various characters you created for this chapter and great work on bringing them to life! Like how you are writing the political fallout of Amelia being herself.

Nick

Tftc!

Aura

Thanks for the chap! So is Suijin still only a second word? It was mentioned in the previous chapter that he had 'ascended', whatever that is. Sooo.... going by power-level measurements, is it perhaps possible he's now a Third word or higher? Like how Amelia meant to cast a sixth-circle spell when it was now considered to be seventh-circle, and nearly broke the containment room? We also had some talk of canonizing her just before all that went down. I half expected that to be part of the talk here in the Parliament, but it seems there's some information control going on, with various levels of success. Neat!

UnderwhelmingBird

Ah, the Western lands, of mischief and menace. Showing up and timing the presentation of the letter at the optimal time to cause the greatest ruckus. Well played

Keene

Good catch, thank you will fixed <3

Zoe

It wasn’t the same as she when he invoked Asclepius, where the messy communion made her manic and she needed Serena to calm her down. Typo i think? she when he > when she? Ty4c

Keene

Thanks! I'm looking forward to writing it :)

Keene

Thank you! Hope I can keep the quality up for you! <3

Jacobr365

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next! Thanks!

Annora D.

Thank you for the chap, I loved it

Keene

Sorry for the wait! <3

Aura

Hahaha, not me refreshing your Creator page like 100+ times since the RR chapter dropped till this finally posted xD


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