SSS 1: Resurrection
🕑 Added 2025-08-14 12:01:26 +0000 UTCComments
Chosen Juan
System detected. I’m out. Good luck but I’ll be sticking to Amelia Thornheart
Edward Ravenbear
I should add... NO sparkles!! And no stalking high school girls.
Keene
Thanks for the kind words and thanks for reading! <3 Lots of baked goods to come ^.^
Keene
Mmm! I always like writing first chapters that would make me want to keep reading, so it's great to see it works for others! Thanks for reading <3
Keene
Thank you <3 and thanks for reading! <3
Keene
Thanks for reading! <3
Bast
Thanks for the chapter!
Edward Ravenbear
Great opening chapter. I only hope she is a true vampire. Like drinks blood etc.
TriNcess
Ah yes, "Vampires, GL, and Kingdom building" the three spices of life :3
Mutalith
Ah yes, the infamous water and honey vampire. BEWARE YOUR BAKED GOODS! All jokes aside a very cool intro chapter, really looking forward to see where this goes.
Mason
As a start, this is really strong. Other people may have more relevant critiques than I do. I’m intrigued so far I’d love to see where this goes.
Arcy
Oooo I really love litRPG stories that fight against the system so this is right up my alley, looking forward to where you’ll take this!
Puppy Piranha Forever
A very cool beginning and so looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Keene
Thanks for reading! <3
Keene
I'll change the wording so it doesn't sound as harsh. Until I figure out the best solution, the reality is screen-readers alone will miss out details due to the image-based content. Alt-text will help with this but I'm not sure it'll be sufficient on all images, but we'll see. Thanks for reading!
Valeria_
It's weird to explicitly call out and discourage screen readers. They are a important accessibility tool that many many people require to use their computers. Assuming you don't want disabled people to never read your work, you should add alt text to you images that summarizes the plot-relevant details within.
shootingQuasar1
Interesting...
Annora D.
Thanks for the chap
Keene
Lot's of questions and they'll be quickly answered in the coming chappies not to worry! There will be multiple types of vampires in this series, each with their own strengths and weaknesses ^.^ Thanks for reading! <3
Garrett Cannon
1 chapter leaves me way to lost but im intrigued. how lucky she is that a flowing trickle of water doesnt turn her in dust. We the readers r going to have to know what type of vampires are in this world. Sun hurts? garlic hurt? pointy wood? mirrors? silver weapons? shapeshifting? to many questions