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Little Sister 10 (367 pages)

🕑 Added 2023-05-25 15:06:38 +0000 UTC

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Macrophage

litter sister可以构思美娜设计让小妹妹把小霞的皮穿上成为小霞，一来报“小霞”背刺自己的仇，二来作为小霞来跟自己哥哥谈恋爱最后结婚，然后就可以不用写这一条线专心去写美娜线了。我也很喜欢if线，感觉比主线要精彩很多

alwayson

能发一下4月额外奖励吗保存的链接打不开

花谙

还是比较期待最后所有人（除了男性角色）和解开impart的哈哈哈

挽风

大佬实在是翻不了墙，能不能发一份，2308213898@qq.com

YTsnow2013

发你了

YTsnow2013

On the other hand, I made the Katherine as the main character for these chapters on purpose, because I thought that Nancy and Claire overdid in the beginning of story, so I want Katherine to punish them. And I like Katherine, so... I said that I want to make what I want to make because if I make what I don't like, the quality will be bad. But I'm sure that the story will speed up in next chapter.

YTsnow2013

Hi, thank you for the comment and the critique. And I totally understand them, in fact I didn't have a whole plan for my stories, I also said that when I posted the Shadow Game 1, I said that it was the first time I planned the part 2 and 3 for a long story. So for Little Sister, I usually plan a new chapter when I decide to make it, so the problem is that the coherence of the story is not well ensured. For example, I wanted to end this story when Lan and Katherine was in the attic. But finally I decided to let Katherine make the anti-kill. Then I thought. why not make the Katherine the main character for some of the next parts. So these chapters were made. And the Little Sister 10 is slow, I also know that. In fact I also don't want this, but this month I don't have enough time to make more scenes. The first half month I got infected by covid, so I made comics very slow, then I have to expand the sex scenes in the first part of this story, which used about 200 pages in yoga classroom.

YTsnow2013

Try the QR code

YTsnow2013

I’ll make more on story in next chapter.

YTsnow2013

嗯之后会增加剧情的

YTsnow2013

让我多做几期Little Sister吧（

YTsnow2013

我其实没想好哈哈哈

YTsnow2013

要不试一下我链接中给的那个网站直接扫描二维码

Eb18

Yeah, I don’t want to make a comment as long as the last time but I'll mention one or two of the same points. This series has gone on so long and has taken such a different direction its practically a different story now (and probably should have been titled as such). I mean we have almost completely different set of characters from the original, a different set of motivations and a new character getting introduced almost every new chapter (which in itself is hard to follow with the different dynamics). I hope with this change in direction everything eventually comes together. My biggest critique still is the way the story was structured, from the start to now, could have been handled better, because now the pacing is so slow as result. Especially the last 3 or 4 chapters could have been their own separate, but connected story to little sister, with Katherine as the main character. That would’ve been way more satisfying to me. Anyway, hope to see 'False Honour 3' soon.

oowwjsjdi

你打开了吗

oowwjsjdi

我的也打不开

Slaanesh

Even if you enter the address written on the fan card, an error keeps popping up and you can't read it. It's so inconvenient every time you make the fan card link so obscure.