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🕑 Added 2019-09-27 04:55:25 +0000 UTC

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Magnolia Ducky

Aw thanks Diooo! ; v;/ Yee Addie's social skills still aren't that great Dx And yeeee that's a big part of Ella's arc this chapter! :0 Hehe Reixi's French is really invaluable when it comes to Addie's colorful vocabulary! >:3c

Thatguyknownasdio

That was an impressive, first read into the lives of the Omnivoyant! I thoroughly enjoyed the intimate moments that make up the team and seeing their usual hijinx and familiarity with one another. What makes this more real for me is the discordant introduced as well between Ella and Adelaide. I've a feeling that mentioning of Rev as she did was unintentional to hurt her and was more out of jealousy. Furthermore, I also dug bringing up Ella's general feelings about feeling useless and trying to do what she can to pitch in and feeling like she's contributing. I think that's something we can all relate to. Vis-a-vis, this seems to set her up for what I hope to see a more badass Ella later on in the story. :D Finally, I did enjoy Adelaide's use of french. I could literally hear her talk in my head (thanks Reixi!). Looking VERY forward to reading moar!

Magnolia Ducky

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Reixi2525

"my editor", huh. That's literally ghostwriting at that point. You better give da least 25% of the Patreon funds to that ghostwriter 😏

Stelladess

Thats a lot of writing! Looking forward to read it~


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