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Amber | Chapter 49. 

🕑 Added 2024-03-26 04:15:57 +0000 UTC

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Dynorion

Everyone knows that you can't simply win a boss fight without tapping into the Dao of Banter. It's too strong

tibbish

For someone who is supposed to be killing the Oracle and getting it over with fast before he pulls some shenanigans she sure does a lot of mid fight chatting!

87894354

Thanks for the chapter. Assorted notes and typos: "Oracle, turned in anger and slammed his staff with a burst of fire." Drop the coma. "One that made Amber used her sword in response." Should be "use her sword", not "used her sword". "there was a robbed man whose robes looked slightly different" Should be "robed" man. Although I guess that Amber *did* rob him of his moment of triumph... "Oh, we were just going to arrest the two noble families involved, this is just a coincidence.” This is just *perfect*! It's like saying to arrogant Big Bad "oh yeah, we just destroyed your life's work and we weren't even trying to". "A demon arm in the air emerged and Amber cut right through it" This.. really doesn't flow. Perhaps "a demon arm emerged from the air"? But Oracle didn’t stop there as he began to summon a myriad of demon limbs to attack her, all of them which she tore right through as she chased against the man that was backing off. "all of them which" -> "all of which". "she chased against the man" -> "she chased the man" (or perhaps "she chased after the man"). Huh. What's worse than a terrifying demonic hell-monster? One which holds a grudge against you specifically.

El_Vandragon

Interesting that the Oracle has already met Amber, I wonder if it is Elcaro from the Arcane Research Institution (ch 20)! Amber felt off about that interaction and he also inquired about the Demonic staff she had at the time so I think there could be some kind of relationship between him and this group summoning demons.


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