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You are Summoned. Chapter 51.

🕑 Added 2023-07-21 18:58:10 +0000 UTC

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Thanks Dax. I didn't get too far into the details on the gnome village, as we're only going to be there for a short while. You will see some integration of magic and tech in the next couple chapters as he goes through the village itself, but so far, Rico's just been in combat, so there hasn't been much interaction with the villagers, other than the farmers he tried to rescue.

Dax

Really liking the action in this arc so far! He says that he's worried he'll become one of them, but he's a summon. He'll evaporate when he dies instead of his body becoming undead. On another note, I find the particular setting this summon is taking place in to be stretching believability if this is meant to be a real world with real people. Its fine for a web series, I guess, but you should consider making some changes should you want to publish. So far this seems to be a medieval farming village, and yet they also have powerful magic and are building mechs? Where is any of that magic and technology in the village or farm? They are still using hand tools for farm work. And where are they getting any of the advanced and processed materials needed to build the mechs? Certainly not from the village blacksmith in between filling orders for new saucepans, shovels, and horseshoes. I think the incongruencies here can be resolved with a little more worldbuilding. Like, maybe most of the gnome civilization is underground and the cave is one entrance to a larger city, the village being one of their food producing outposts? I still think some of that magitech should have found its way into day-to-day life in the village though. If there are reasons why not, maybe they should have been touched on during one of the chapters prior to the attack? I dunno, just throwing out ideas.

J S

Good thinking!


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