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Lantern Fish
🕑 Added 2019-12-09 04:14:32 +0000 UTCClick ----> HERE to read.
Later than planned I present you the first 9 (one is a spread) pages of my recent comic project :)
Originally I planned to upload the first 5 pages on Tapas.io on friday but had to push back a little since the preparations weren't done. I'm about to upload them right after posting this though.
As my Patrons you get 9 instead of 5 pages this week and as I try to update the comic weekly, you will always get the pages of the following week in advace.
The language isn't edited yet and probably won't be until the whole thing is ready for print so when you see a mistake (typo, grammar, puctuation (I'm really bad at that) please feel free to inform me :)
Comments
Zylk
Thank you so much that is really helpful^^ I'm very bad with punctuations and for some reason I'm unable to see typos myself so I'm very thankful you noticed them :) as for the suggestions, I will check in with my 'editor'.
ShadowsOfADay
Oh wow *v* The coloring is sooo pretty! Especially all those sky and water shots *0*)/<3 I am amazed <3 It all turned out great so far! ^0^)/ . As for typos/punctuation, I found 4(?) => p.6 I think “lets” should be “let’s”, and you wrote “soonder” instead of “sooner” p. 7, I’m not sure if it was intentional or if it’s some English rule I don’t know, but you put a capital L for “life form”? I would use a lowercase but again I might be mistaken~ p. 8, I would use a “-“ (or “,” if you prefer, but I feel like the former is more appropriate for some reason 🤔) instead of a dot for the sentence “No one knows[...]”. So as to not begin the next sentence with “Or” ^v^)b I re-check tomorrow but this is what I saw so far c: Thanks again for sharing!!
