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Friday Progress Report

🕑 Added 2022-09-02 20:19:01 +0000 UTC
Friday Progress Report
Friday Progress Report

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David Ihnen

Well, to start with, something ambient. They're out on the terrace - are there birds? Is there distant traffic or beeps, passing hoofbeats? Creaks of the furniture, scuffs and movement? How noisy is a kiss when you're actually deep inside it, how juicy might it sound? What if they were more audibly/enthusiastically vocal? They're fairly muted, gentle here - how far is too far over the top? More grunts and squeaks? When the scene angle changes does that change the left/right balance orientation of the ambience? I literally don't know how these would play or feel without experimenting and comparing them, honestly. I'm not faulting your foley so much as pointing out "there is a lot of space to play with here". And as shallow and unprofessional as any specific thought I might have on it may be, I know there are people out there who could make a bomber foley track that could no doubt greatly enhance the work, which is why I imagine what maybe a really inspired and professional foley artist could make of it. And that sounds like I'm poopooing your work, which isn't my intention - it seems like there's space here for some interesting creativity. Maybe there isn't in your production, that you only want it to be what you've laid down here, and that's okay too. It's just friendly thoughts! :). <3

pxl fur

Thanks for your comment, glad you like the audio. if what's there is good I'd like to work to get it better myself. If there are any ideas you have for ways you'd like to see it changed or altered or different approaches taken I'm all ears. As for opening it up for anyone to dub, I don't want to get into a situation where there are endless audio versions of varying quality out there, instead looking to have a refined single version that can be released.

David Ihnen

I like the audio... it'd be interesting if there was an invite to foley other audio tracks onto it. :). It'd be interesting to see what other people do with it too, don't you think?


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