New Potential Shirt Design! Feedback appreciated!!

Mr Rayner

I like the design but agree with DWV, Punching Weight Dude needs to go to the lower hem of the shirt. If you want to include n SSFF logo, may I suggest on the bottom of the sleeve or under the collar on the back? I love great design tees but don't overly like a large garish logo on the front.

I think if you have a logo on there it should be the Punching Weight logo rather than the Stop Skeletons logo

DWV

From the viewpoint of graphic design aesthetics, I don't like the way Punching Weight Dude is simply cut off at the waist. The design could work without a logo if only the whole body was shown, but a Punching Weight logo would draw the eye and cover up the missing lower half. Just an opinion, though.

GunPuncher

Most defintely needs the punching weight logo. Would most definitely be completed with some text. But its a dope shirt.

I would add the lightening city inthe background to add more motion and flair to it

I’m all for it.

Stop Skeletons From Fighting

this is a pretty cool shirt!

Stop Skeletons From Fighting

i love this idea too!! i'm not sure but i will check. i love those new longsleeve shirts with the rad logos on the sleeves

Stop Skeletons From Fighting

this is a cool idea!

Stop Skeletons From Fighting

congrats!! wowza!

Some Spoony Bard

Could definitely use the Punching Weight logo

Also i really like the design / picture!! :)

In this example (the awesome hard drive shirt!), the ltt logo is in the back. (One of the pictures) https://www.lttstore.com/products/hard-drive-shirt

By the way, the ltt logo of linus tech tips on their shirts is very small... (unless you get the bold letters shirt)

Yes, put ssff or stop skeleton from fighting... i might buy one :) i bought a linus tech tips tshirt and what is Nice about it is people ask what the tshirt is about... free publicity!! I'll have to remember why your show is called ssff hahaha

James Peters

Hi Grace! Would it be possible to get Stop Skeletons From Fighting on the sleeve? I think that would really bring things together.

J.M.H

The Punching Weight/not-Shatterhand guy is a good start, but I would definitely recommend the SSFF and/or Punching Weight logo somewhere, or it'll just look like one of those cool indie artist shirts everyone has these days. Rep the brand!

Spiralofvertigo

Agree with some others that a punching weight logo would really tie this together!

Blake Wall

Also I agree with SammyCola

Blake Wall

It looks good but it might be better with a purple border around the design to make it pop a little more ( I may be in the minority on this one so keep that in mind)

Zeromaster

Just in time! I dropped 70 lbs and my 5x SSFF shirt is a little baggy now

Golden Prince

I think having either a pixelated punching weight or SSFF logo on the bottom or above would help fill it out a bit more

Jason Hurley

I think that merch should advertise you a little bit - the image is great, but no one will really know what it's from unless they know.

Imo should add a punching weight logo to give context. Having a SSFF somewhere could be a nice touch too.

Alexa L.

It does feel like it's missing something. I think a SSFF or Punching Weight logo underneath would look better.

TankErdin

Gotta echo the others in that it needs something branding wise to pull it together.

John Drew

Awesome design, but I think the text "stop skeletons from fighting" below it would look rad.

I love the design! It's simple and clean. I think it would look better on a different colour of shirt but I don't think that was particularly part of the question. Maybe add the SSFF on the back for that comming and going effect? Also SSFF is wonderful and I love you all so much! ✌❤🥔

Jay Thomas

What about a different color scheme?

Collin Json

It does feel a little empty, but I tend to prefer shirts that don't have logos or text

Greninka

I love it as it is :)

It feels like it's missing something. I think the shirt could go with the actual punching weight logo underneath him.

JLunaarS

Sounds really specific, but "Stop Skeletons From Fighting" on a shirt with no skeletons strikes me as too... needlessly referential? I hope that makes sense. Slapping "SSFF" in bold letters BEHIND Punch-Face, though? Iconic.

Would definitely prefer more going on in the shirt.

Anto5 the hedgehog

yeah, the title in the t-shirt will be nice and a good ad (?)

Djurre van der Veen

I like it. But it feels kind of empty compared to the other shirts IMO

Amy Veeres

It seems a little bland. Maybe the graphic where he's punching and the glass is shattering would be better?

Chris Hensch

I think that the "Stop Skeletons From Fighting" would look sick if it was underneath the design. Will definitely be buying this one!