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AA 1.23 - Successor

🕑 Added 2025-04-17 20:15:46 +0000 UTC

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Dennis

yeah. he already got a new skill at Umbral level 5.

Chris O'Connor

Just read all these and enjoying so far. One thing I noticed is that you always describe the enemies in detail but barely describe the humans.

Jeffrey Worrall

Really liking the story so far, though I think Andy is making a mistake not upping his spears skill to 5. Maybe getting a 5 in a skill gives him “mastery” over it or something. Plus it seems like a decent threshold for a class evolution or whatever the system was talking about.

Chris

I'm loving the gritty, no-nonsense nature of this world. The system itself may seem a bit nonsensical and eccentric at times, but the post-apocalyptic world it's created is brutal and cut-throat. Typically, in stories like this, the characters that lack the nerve to do what they need to and make the hard decisions don't survive very long. I expect we'll see Andy's attitude harden even more the longer he survives.

Omar Jimenez

Honestly, a little worried how this will impact Andy's path going forward. On one hand, the psychological aftermath of intentionally going out to commit murder, justified sure, but still, premeditated murder. On the other, the System could be very easily rewarding him down the murderhobo pipeline if he's not careful. I trust Plum enough to believe this will be a generally positive storyline, but Andy might have some heavy trauma along the way.

Omar Jimenez

Victor?

Samuel Jennings

SPIT ROAST THE WHISTLER ON YOUR SPEARRRRR

David H

Allright! I think Andy is getting smarter! And its ok if you surprise him (and me) with the system announcing something that requires 5 points to get.

Exaiter

Oh crap that sounds sucky Plum. Good chapter, thanks

Dylan Alexander

Greg Lambert

I'm liking the 'start' of this. The characters, while feeling straight out of central casting, still feel authentic.


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