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A New Star Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-05-16 17:00:11 +0000 UTC

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PickledTink

---- I switched to a more offensive tact ---- The correct word is "tack". ---- watching her shed and parry every blow ---- I understand what you mean by shed, but that's a word that is effectively never used in this kind of circumstance. "dodge" or "avoid" is far more typical. ---- She didn't pull her swung ---- Typo: wrong tense. Should be "swing". ---- "I true warrior masters all martial weapons," ---- Typo, should be "A" not "I"

deushadow

"I true warrior masters all martial weapons," < a

outlaw

Tftc!


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