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夏の進捗日記5/Summer Progress Diary 5
🕑 Added 2022-07-11 06:07:33 +0000 UTC皆さまいつも応援ありがとうございますー！🙏✨✨
Thank you all for your continued support!🙏✨✨
昨日は午後に買い出しや食事に出かけたりしたので作業配信が遅めになってしまってペン入れ2ページするつもりが2ページ目のキャラ描いたあたりで終わりにしたので中途半端な進行に。 今週黙々と進められるかがキモな気がするのでがんばりますよー。😆
Yesterday, I went out for shopping and dinner in the afternoon, so my work was delivered late. I was supposed to pen two pages, but I finished the second page when I drew the characters, so I was halfway through. I will do my best to keep going this week, because I think the key is whether I can do it quietly or not.😆
昨日までの結果です。下描きは順調、ペン入れはもう少しペースを上げたいところ。
Here are the results up to yesterday. Drafting is going well, penning needs to pick up the pace a little more.
終わった下描き15/48 終わったペン入れ6.5/48
Drafts done 15/48 Pens done 6.5/48
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13p：ジュンちゃんのオナニー事後です。ネームの時は引きではぁはぁしてる全身見せようと思っていたのですけれどネームから構図を変更した8ページ目の全身入った引きのコマと似てしまうのと余韻をもう少し味わっている印象を増したかったのでバストアップ構図に変更。🙂
This is Jun's post-masturbation. I was going to show her whole body in a close-up when I drew the story, but I changed the composition to a bust-up because I wanted to give the impression that she was enjoying the afterglow a little more and it would be similar to the close-up on page 8, where I changed the composition from the story's name.🙂
自分の汁の味を確かめながらせいあ君の汁の味を想像しちゃうえっちなジュンちゃんというシーンになりました。
ネーム段階から構図を変更した影響が他のページに及んでしまいましたという例ですね。商業でやると担当さんに怒られちゃうやつなので構図はよくよく考えて出さないといけませんねぇ…。😓
The scene is about a naughty Jun who imagines the taste of Seia's juices while checking the taste of her own juices.
This is an example of how changing the composition from the name stage had an effect on other pages. If I did this in a commercial setting, I would have been scolded by my supervisor, so I had to think carefully about the composition before submitting the work...😓
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14p：時間がまた進みます。ジュンちゃんはオナニー後浴衣に着替えていとこのヒロシ君の家に向かいます。ネームの時は引きで場所を示すひろし君の家を映したコマとジュンちゃんを待ってる子達というコマだったんですが、とても説明的で味気ないので、集まってかき氷を食べているというシーンに変更。日本の夏感がわかりやすくなったかなと思います。
加えてひろし君がはっぴにふんどしを締めているという姿を強調できたので変更して良かったなと思います。😉
Time moves forward again. After masturbating, Jun changes into a yukata and heads to her cousin Hiroshi's house. In the original design, there was a frame showing Hiroshi's house and the children waiting for Jun, but it was very explanatory and tasteless, so I changed it to a scene of the children gathering together to eat shaved ice. I think it made it easier to understand the feeling of summer in Japan.
In addition, I was able to emphasize the fact that Hiroshi is wearing a happi and a loincloth, so I am glad I made the change.😉
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15p：いとこのヒロシ君もまだお子様なのではっぴふんどし姿が刺激的なのを認識していません。ジュンちゃんはかっこいいとおだてて、せいあ君にもはっぴとふんどしを着させることに成功させるというシーン。
ネームではドキドキしてるだけのバストアップ構図の予定でしたが、ちょっと悪い子な表情のジュンちゃんにしました。😎
Cousin Hiroshi is still a child and does not realize how exciting it is to wear a happifundoshi. Jyun flatters him as being cool, and succeeds in getting Seia to wear a happi and fundoshi as well.
In the name, I was going to use a bust-up composition of her just being nervous, but I decided to make Jun look a bit like a bad girl.😎
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昨日の下描きページの元になったネームです。
15ページ以外は印象的な部分の変更をしていますが割とお気に入りな感じに下描きできたので満足してます。変更なく下描きできるのが一番なのですが、より良い作品になるよう気を付けて進めていきたいですね。😀
This is the original name for yesterday's draft page.
I am satisfied with the drafts, as they are relatively my favorite, except for page 13,14, where I changed some of the more impressive parts. It would be best if I could do the drafting without any changes, but I would like to proceed with care so that the work will be even better.😀
さて今日もがんばらないとー！😆✨
Well, I have to work hard today!😆✨
ではまた次の更新をお楽しみにです。👦👧
See you again for the next update.👦👧
