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🌸表紙構図決ã¾ã‚Šã¾ã—ãŸãƒ¼ï¼/ I've decided on the cover!
🕑 Added 2021-09-11 14:43:09 +0000 UTC皆ã•ã¾ã„ã¤ã‚‚å¿œæ´ã‚ã‚ŠãŒã¨ã†ã”ã–ã„ã¾ã™ï¼ðŸ™âœ¨âœ¨âœ¨
Thank you all for your support!ðŸ™âœ¨âœ¨âœ¨
今日ã¯è¡¨ç´™ã®æ§‹å›³ãŒæ±ºã¾ã£ãŸã®ã§ãƒ©ãƒ•ã‚’ã®ã›ã¨ãã¾ã™ãƒ¼ã€‚
I've decided on the composition of the cover, so I'll post a rough sketch today.
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By the way, the title is going to be "Doki Doki Gokko".　😉
* "Doki Doki Gokko" means Exciting plaything
決ã¾ã£ãŸæ§‹å›³ã®ãƒ†ãƒ¼ãƒžã¯ã€Œè„±ã„ã§ã¿ãŸã‘ã©â€¦ã‚„ã£ã±ã‚Šã¯ãšã‹ã—ーï¼ãƒ‰ã‚ドã‚ï¼ã€ã§ã™ã€‚😋
This is the theme of the decided composition. "I tried taking it off, but... it's still embarrassing! I'm so excited! I was thrilled!😋
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I'm going to be rushing to get it into shape over the next week and a half, so there will be a few more minor updates, but stay tuned!😉
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構図ã®æœ€çµ‚調整ã¯ã“ã‚“ãªæ„Ÿã˜ã§ã—ãŸã€‚↓
The final adjustment of the composition looked like this. ↓
図ã®èµ¤ãƒšãƒ³ã§æŒ‡ç¤ºãŒã‚ã‚‹ã®ãŒæ‹…当æ°ã‹ã‚‰ã®è¦æœ›ã«ãªã‚Šã¾ã™ã€‚ç”»åƒã‚’拡大ã—ã¦ã‚‚èªã‚ã¾ã™ãŒã€ç•ªå·é †ã«èª¬æ˜Žã—ã¾ã™ã€‚😄
The instructions in red pen in the figure are the requests from the person in charge. You can read them by enlarging the image, but I will explain them in numbered order.😄
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最後ã®èª¿æ•´é …目　Last adjustment item
全体：all
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ç”»é¢ã‚’引ã„ã¦ã‚‚ã†å°‘ã—全体ãŒå…¥ã‚‹ã‚ˆã†ã«ã€‚
Please draw the characters so that they are a little more in the screen.
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目線をã‚ã’ã¦ã»ã—ã„。
Give her a look.
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髪をã¼ã•ã¼ã•ã«ã—ã™ãŽã¦ã„ãŸã®ã§æ¢³ã‹ã—ãŸé«ªã«ã€‚
Her hair is shaggy, comb it.
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図書委員ã®è…•å¸¯ã‚’åŠ ãˆã¦ã€‚
Add the arm band of a library committee member.
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よりよã„è„šã®ãƒãƒ¼ã‚ºã‚’考ãˆã‚‹ã€‚
Think of better leg poses.
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以上ã®æŒ‡ç¤ºã‚’è¸ã¾ãˆã¦ç•ªå·é †ã«æã„ãŸé•ã„ã¯ä¸‹ã«è¨˜ã—ã¦ã¾ã™ã€‚😀
The differences, drawn in numbered order based on the above instructions, are noted below.😀
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１：脚を開ã„ã¦ä»–ã®ãƒãƒ¼ã‚ºã¯å…ƒã‚’ç¶æŒ
　　Open the legs and keep the other poses original.
２：指ã§ãƒ‘ンツをã²ã£ã‹ã‘ã¦è„±ã„ã§ã‚‹ã‚ˆã†ã«
　　She hooks her pants with her fingers and poses as if she's about to take them off.
　　
３：脱ã„ã パンツをæ¡ã£ã¦ã‚¢ã‚½ã‚³ã‚’éš ã™
　　She grabs her own undressed pants and hides her vagina.
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ï¼”ã®æŒ‡å®šã¯é´ä¸‹ãŒå…¥ã‚‹ã‚ˆã†ãªãƒãƒ¼ã‚ºã€è„±ãŽæ–¹ã‚’変ãˆãŸãƒãƒ¼ã‚ºã‚’考ãˆã¦ã„ã¾ã™ã€‚
For number 4, I'm thinking of a pose where the socks can fit, and a different way to take them off.
ï¼”â€a：ã“ã‚ŒãŒæ±ºå®šã•ã‚ŒãŸã‚‚ã®ã€‚↑å‚照　
　　　This is what has been decided. ↑See up.
ï¼”â€b：パンツをã¤ã¾ã‚“ã§è„±ããƒãƒ¼ã‚º
　　　Pause as she picks up her pants and takes them off.
ï¼”â€c：パンツをãšã‚ŠãŠã‚ã—ã¦ã„ã‚‹ãƒãƒ¼ã‚º
　　　Pose with pants down.
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Now all I have to do is draw the cover lushly to finish it! I'll do my best!😉
ãã‚Œã‹ã‚‰è£è¡¨ç´™ã®ã‚¢ãƒ³ã‚±ãƒ¼ãƒˆã‚‚別ã«æŠ•ç¨¿ã—ã¦ã‚ã‚Šã¾ã™ã®ã§ã”å‚åŠ ã„ãŸã ã‘ãŸã‚‰å¬‰ã—ã„ã§ã™ï¼ðŸ˜†
Also, I've posted a separate survey on the back cover, and I'd be happy if you could participate!😆
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