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Chapter 1: The Restaurant

🕑 Added 2023-08-24 00:48:04 +0000 UTC

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MerlinO

Maldita sea, estoy feliz y enojado, feliz porque desde los primeros capítulos quería una versión independiente para esta historia y enojado por qué toca esperar para volver al punto donde se quedó la historia, me alegro por Naruto y por la Salvación para Sakura (de parte de cualquiera que lo haga)

Osiris Sundavr

Perhaps Silas can devour the fragments of Angra Mainyu for a power boost. Like little horcruxes. The pure sins inherent in those fragments should help him a lot since DxD devils are so closely related to the nature of the sins. I don’t know if that is true or not but this is fan fiction so some creative liberties can be taken.

ReadingOverSleeping

I really liked the previous version and I'm glad to see it getting fleshed out in this version. For the DxD character who will become a patron of the restaurant, maybe you should consider Crom Cruach. Crom Cruach aspires for strength and went around the world to find challenges, what better challenge than to go to parallel universes? Also, Touma should probably be careful to never touch Naruto's stomach where the seal is... I don't know how the restaurant will react to a mountain sized fox popping inside the room. Probably turn Kurama bunny sized to fit in the room. Regarding Sakura, the worms Zouken implanted in her contained a fragment of Angra Mainyu. Angra Mainyu is 'All the World's Evil' and bears 'All of the curses of Mankind', I wonder how Satoru would react to that lol. Sakura should probably never enter the Jujutsu World, if the premise that entering a world exposes you to their system from the previous version remains, Angra Mainyu might spontaneously incarnate lol. Sukuna can exit the stage, there's a new God in town. Also, I would like to think Satoru is the best choice to deal with Zouken since he is more like a walking calamity (curse) than human at this point.

Osiris Sundavr

I love this already and can’t wait to see how Silas impacts everyone and their worlds. Will Hiruzen be able to find the restaurant and apologize to Naruto? There is also no way that his parents didn’t leave anything for there son in a Will in case of their deaths. They were shinobi after all. I can’t wait to see how Sakura develops as she interacts with people at the Crossroads. Will we get to see Medea and Medusa join the restaurant? Heck will Silas get a servant or two of his own? Looking forward to this expanded version of events. Just putting this out there but Sakura’s “brother” and “Grandfather” need to die.

As of now I prefer the previous version, this is not bad at all, but I guess I just have to wait and read, love your stories man

So will the manga subplot still exist or will it be faded out entirely cause the amount of humor that subplot brought was amazing also I’m picturing everything he can do with the restraunt he can turn it into an in a bar have a currency transition desk for world explorers he could basically make it a restaurant with an adventure guild on the side also we get to watch his relationships develop instead of jumping ahead to them all willing to kill for one another

Savagesmiley

hey what are the chances that Bune farmer story gets its own story now that it has 10 chapters as snippets, instead of that 11th chapter that we want?

Jackle The First

I love that Naruto already did a Talk-no-jutsu. Love him being in the story too! Fantastic chapter. What a way to kick of the full story.

Jackle The First

He updates stories 1-2 times a week. One of those stories is Deal every other week. The other one, or two in the case of it being a non-Deal week, is voted on in the Discord server.

Jackle The First

It is good, but why settle for good when Cross sees room to make it great? This chapter is already proof of that!

Zero1zero1

Average about once a week.

HinoSchwein

How old is Sakura is this

Trey-Way

Bet but how frequently does he update these like every week or whenever??

Southmonk

Whenever there's a cliff on this story it will change to another story, whenever the other story has a cliff it will change into this.

Trey-Way

What’s the update schedule like??

jaycehunter

Wooooohhh!!! Super hyped for this story! Thanks for the chapter!

Darkanlan

Nice to see it as it's own story. Kind of sucks that the previous version won't be finished, but looking forward to seeing how this one turns out.

SilverWolf

Thanks for the chapter

Leonhardt Redfield

Holy shit, this is gonna be great. The snippets are good but this will be on a whole new level.

cdmadgamer

but the snippets were already so good no one that ive seen in reviews has had anything bad to say about it

Savagesmiley

Had the same thought.

Martian

Honestly thought this was chapter 11 not 1 and was confused for way too long Xd


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