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Chapter 19: An Old Flame

🕑 Added 2025-01-19 03:23:46 +0000 UTC

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Erikbongo

I personally think that the Bards POV is also interesting. Aside from him and the Romans tho, its hit or miss. I read veeeryyy quickly through some of the Noble POVS for example. The story is otherwise just too good, I always want to just get back to it.

sparkc

The fact the main pov likes to waffle, while very much in character, really adds to the problem

sparkc

I think the story is being paced as if the chapters are 4K words long as opposed to 2k At 4k you can get away with a lot of “filler” (it’s not really filler, it adds depth to the characters and setting but it’s very low plot density). At 2k word chapters it kinda feels like very little happens.

Moses Lambert

Hmm.... Yeah, that's reasonable. Of course, don't forget how Zeus had to frequently flee from a pissed-off Hera when she found out about another of his, ummm,,, "escapades".

Beeees!

Seems like the Roman's been here before. Will be very interesting to learn more about the ruins

Beeees!

My guess is Mars and Jupiter waking up

Moses Lambert

Help to escape an accusatory woman - must be god-given... Wonder which one?


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