Mireille
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[WIP] Page 11
🕑 Added 2024-04-25 11:53:01 +0000 UTCFew more pages and i can call it a half of the chapter. And also it can be named Chapter 0 part A, for example. Because the story will come to its logical conclusion in this particular situation. And another will begin, as a result of the first. 🤔
Maybe i can also post it somewhere publically already.
After redaction of course.
I have a friend who is experienced in storytelling and is a native English speaker unlike me (i wonder how many stupid mistakes i made in the dialogue clouds). Maybe he'll give me a few advices about the text and style, and about storytelling too..
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