The Ladynoir Texts Pt. 19
🕑 Added 2020-08-06 09:04:07 +0000 UTCOh boy this one took me a loooong time to finish and it was 100% because of the dialogue! These two arguing about anything is so hard to write in character (at least for me lol). I must have rewritten this a million times (thank you to everyone that helped me!)
I decided to try something different with this AU. I know we mostly see Ladybug being the one telling Chat they can't reveal their identities so I thought we might change things up a bit and have him be the one telling her no.
I hope you're all looking forward to the next one! <3
Comments
Cat Butler
Oh my kwamis!!! I love how they're both taking care of their heart-broken holders!!!
Miraculous Elcie
Oh my heart... π
Madison Layne
Uuuggghhhh, the feels!!!!! I absolutely love how heβs the one crying and the expressions on the kwamis. I eagerly await the next gut wrenching episode
Raven
The angst ππ
Calypso Jex
just break my heart more please
LaurenceL
Ooooh I love where this is going!!! ππ₯Ίπ Good job Vyper!!!
E.K. Wolf
*cracks and breaks* Whelp, there goes my heart
Katie
My heart
Darcy
Oh my heart, but it makes sense with how he is
AndaisLu
I just feel pain!! ><
Rosie
Oh, wow. This is so beautiful, but it breaks my heart. Every time you make Adrien cry, it just gets me! I always look forward to the next installment of this! β€οΈ
Kae
Oh my heart... This is beautiful and poignant all at once. And again, Chat Noir is sacrificing himself for his Lady's sake. (There's also the counter argument that Marinette could make that as the Guardian, she needs to know who he is and vice versa in case if something is ever wrong with Plagg but that's another story) Wonderful job on this piece Vyper. I love the air of misery their postures/poses scream even if I hate to see my two favorite dorks hurting so badly. I can't wait for the next piece!
Mada
This is so hauntingly beautiful. You really poured the feels in this one π poor babies I just want them to be happy π₯Ί
Sandy Leung
Wow, it sure a rollercoaster ride. I'm super looking forward to the next one. Please tell me they will be fine. Pleeeeeeeasssseeeee, I'm begging us.
Bream
*cry in French*
Stella
Tikki and Plagg are so sweet πβ€π
Pagan In Purple
Ow, why do you hurt me so?
Abbie
WHY DO YOU PLaY WITH OUR HEARTS LIKe THIs *drowns in tears*
CherryTwinsMom
*crying*
Mystic_Raven20
I almost had a nervous break down before looking at this after watching your twitch ππ I love it, nice twist to the tale.